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  • EchelonWiLControl

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    For comment swap
    First off I am a huge fan of Avenged Sevenfold, they are amazing so this story definitely got me excited when I saw what it was about. I know for comment swap we are actually suppose to read it first however since it is the sequel I'm not going to. I'm going to go read the first one first. I love the layout and from what I've noticed it looks like your spelling and grammar are great. I'm definitely going to subscribe to this one and read it after I read the first one.
    November 3rd, 2014 at 04:02am
  • sallyreuter13

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    I didn't even realize there WAS a sequel, either I missed it when/if you said something about it in your author's notes, or you didn't at all. Either way, it's mild insanity and I look forward to reading the further adventures!
    August 19th, 2014 at 10:28am
  • disneyland.acid.trip

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    @ sallyreuter13
    Aw, thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I hope you continue on to the sequeal, the newest chapter's a bit if a chang from where this one left off!
    August 19th, 2014 at 05:45am
  • sallyreuter13

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    I really like the way this story is written, it really kept me interested! There were times I was torn between situations being sweet or heartbreaking, or maybe a combo of them both! Your previous readers/commenters were definetly right when they said each chapter was worth the wait. When Rissa had to leave matt, I have to admit that a few tears fell.
    August 19th, 2014 at 05:40am
  • mrsmshadz

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    I am!!!
    January 24th, 2014 at 01:26am
  • disneyland.acid.trip

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    @ mrsmshadz
    The first chapter is up now, gooo reeaaadd iitttt, I wanna know what you think!
    January 24th, 2014 at 01:22am
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    It's cool! School is more important. Ill wait til tomarra!
    January 23rd, 2014 at 03:36am
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    @ mrsmshadz
    Early tomorrow, I swear. I was so stressed waiting for my exam scores to come today, I completely forgot about everything else. xD
    January 22nd, 2014 at 11:54pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Aww thanks! Works been hectic smh I'm truly hoping you cave! Please cave! Please! For the love of all the things avenged, please cave!!!! Lol
    January 22nd, 2014 at 03:42am
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    @ mrsmshadz
    I've missed you! Ah! xD
    I'm really glad you like it. I'll write a bit more tomorrow for the sequel, but as for now, It won't actually be published until Thursday, roughly. I may cave and put it up tomorrow though, who knows? ;D
    January 22nd, 2014 at 03:26am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Omg!!! I'm finally caught up!! Best chapters, I'm seriously.hoping she's not gone too long. I also seriously hope that Brian does wait for her & is not a douchebag & find some other cheap whore. Anyways I'm so glad there's a sequel!!! I'm starting it now!!!!
    January 22nd, 2014 at 03:12am
  • AllTimeLowIsMyLife14

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    Aw I loved this last chapter! It was so sweet and heartbreaking at the same time. Poor Rissa tho having to leave Matt, that's gotta be tough especially when we all know how hard it would be to leave Matt if he put a puppy dog face on complete with the sad, begging eyes and the puffed out bottom lip, god I can just imagine that, ugh it would be so damn difficult!(curse Matt and damn sexy ass good looks) can't wait for the sequel, I'm so excited!
    January 20th, 2014 at 07:23am
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    @ disneyland.acid.trip
    Aw you're welcome I enjoy taking time out of watching season two of Supernatural and reading The Mortal Instruments:City Of Glass (which these two thing are two of my newest obsessions)
    January 20th, 2014 at 07:08am
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    @ BabiiDoll103
    I'M TRYING NOT TO BUT IT'S DIFFICULT
    January 20th, 2014 at 02:27am
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    @ disneyland.acid.trip
    Don't get all OCD now. lol :P
    January 20th, 2014 at 02:26am
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    @ BabiiDoll103
    I will, soon. I'm just going through and editing each chapter now, but then I'll get on to the sequel.
    January 20th, 2014 at 01:33am
  • BabiiDoll103

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    :'( I teared up. I really don't like that both Rissa and Kory were leaving. I hate that Brian didn't pop up to send her off but I can understand. :/ Rissa is in pieces secretly, leaving Matt.....I know Matt's a tough one, but Rissa....has her moments, especially when she needs to be strong for Kory. Gah! You have to put the sequel up sooooon! I'm dying to know how everyone is taking things and making things work with the distance.
    January 20th, 2014 at 01:18am
  • BabiiDoll103

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    I think Brian will surprise her in NY and that will convince her of how much she misses Cali. :) I hope all the guys see her off! Gah! Outside of Brian.....POOR JIMJAM! Awwww. His fewrend is leaving him. I know he's a big supporter though. :) can't wait to read more!
    January 19th, 2014 at 07:38pm
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    @ AllTimeLowIsMyLife14
    Your comments are fabulous, truly. Thank you so much for them, they make my day. xD
    January 19th, 2014 at 06:00pm
  • AllTimeLowIsMyLife14

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    Oh I can't wait to find out what's gonna happen in New York! Brains reaction was really sweet and super protective I could tell that he loves Kory and doesn't want her to leave. I feel like Brian is afraid of what might happen in New York.
    January 19th, 2014 at 03:32pm