The Witch and the Sorcerer - Comments

Ugh, read it all in one setting. ITS SO GOOD!!!

That was so good. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I absolutely love this story!!! :) please continue with this! I'm loving the plot.

Loving this story cant wait for the next update

This is definitely my favorite Loki story. It's so exciting.

I absolutely love this story! Update soon

@sharpiewashere
Yeah. It's common to make such mistakes ( especially when typing). Please continue the story. I'm waiting for updates. If you have time, please read my " The Uncertain Journey to Space"

Yeah. It's common to make such mistakes ( especially when typing). Please continue the story. I'm waiting for updates. If you have time, please read my " The Uncertain Journey to Space"

@ Hilary okebalama
Yeah that happens when you're writing late at night. Thank-you for liking my story, though!

Yes, continue! I really love the story; the waty you linked Loki's quest to the sight of his mystery woman and to his return to his cave was really captivating.
The only mistake I noticed was toward the ending:
"...her mouth open THE breathe..."
instead of:
"...her mouth open TO breathe..."
Apart from that the rest of the story is.. Mwah!

I like it so far! Please continue :)