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  • AndyChaotic;

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    Ugh, read it all in one setting. ITS SO GOOD!!!
    December 25th, 2013 at 09:09pm
  • imonlysleeping

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    That was so good. I can't wait for the next chapter!
    December 18th, 2013 at 08:53am
  • Amped.

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    I absolutely love this story!!! :) please continue with this! I'm loving the plot.
    December 2nd, 2013 at 04:04am
  • Piper13_89

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    Loving this story cant wait for the next update
    December 2nd, 2013 at 01:35am
  • imonlysleeping

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    This is definitely my favorite Loki story. It's so exciting.
    November 29th, 2013 at 07:16pm
  • imonlysleeping

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    I absolutely love this story! Update soon Very Happy
    November 18th, 2013 at 09:37am
  • Hilary okebalama

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    Yeah. It's common to make such mistakes ( especially when typing). Please continue the story. I'm waiting for updates. If you have time, please read my " The Uncertain Journey to Space" Very Happy
    November 16th, 2013 at 02:52pm
  • Hilary okebalama

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    Yeah. It's common to make such mistakes ( especially when typing). Please continue the story. I'm waiting for updates. If you have time, please read my " The Uncertain Journey to Space" Very Happy
    November 16th, 2013 at 02:52pm
  • sharpiewashere

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    @ Hilary okebalama
    Yeah that happens when you're writing late at night. Thank-you for liking my story, though!
    November 15th, 2013 at 08:45pm
  • Hilary okebalama

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    Yes, continue! I really love the story; the waty you linked Loki's quest to the sight of his mystery woman and to his return to his cave was really captivating.
    The only mistake I noticed was toward the ending:
    "...her mouth open THE breathe..."
    instead of:
    "...her mouth open TO breathe..."
    Apart from that the rest of the story is.. Mwah!
    November 15th, 2013 at 08:01pm
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    I like it so far! Please continue :)
    November 14th, 2013 at 09:17pm
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