Sooner or Later - Comments

Awn, cuddling is the best way to sleep. My empathy for Kenzie only grows.

I can just imagine John looking hella fine on a first date! Kenzie is def the luckiest girl right now, cuddling with John!

Holy crap. At first it doesn't seem like they're into each other, just friends, but I'm willing to take bets now everyone! I think John will be the one to start having feelings for her first. Can't wait to read on!

i'm already in love with this and super excited to see how this turns out!! i'm a fan of both of y'all's stories so this is super exciting for me :) keep it up!!

for some reason it decided to post my comment three times. i tried deleting the other two, but alas...that didn't happen. so that's why the comment below is blank. ha. sorry.

I subscribed, feel the pressure! hahah
I like Kenzie, she has attitude without being too forced and still being feminine. Girl power, yeah. I suggest a little more depth in John's composition, I can't imagine him as a real person yet. He's still too characterized, you know?
In resume, I feel it's going to be a fun story.

I subscribed, feel the pressure! hahah
I like Kenzie, she has attitude without being too forced and still being feminine. Girl power, yeah. I suggest a little more depth in John's composition, I can't imagine him as a real person yet. He's still too characterized, you know?
In resume, I feel it's going to be a fun story.