Psithurisma - Comments

@ ionian squidtao
you know me so well bub

@ etoile.
knew you'd like it

lord help me
this is perfect bye

@ FacingTheBeastInside
thank you!

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i absolutely love this. it's something different and it made me smile. the things you two bring up; well i think i've had those moments too. this is very creative and well-done. keep up the great work!

@ wolves.

@ wolves.
thank you <3

Steve and God are the funniest. You two are the funniest.
P.S. They should talk more about antimatter.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Nate is Steve, I'm God. It's funny because we're both atheist.
Awesome! Updates as soon as Nate wakes up today.

About chapters 01-11:

I liked the lines, i don't know why i created myself. by God and the next chapter where Steve asks if God was real. Don't we all catch ourselves questioning that as well? I think we do.

i might come with you. this world's getting pretty corrupt, isn't it? all these people killing, controlling, destroying as they see fit. i'm not allowed to do anything, either. would you be disappointed if i told you i'm just a wall? i think i would.
Seriously that chapter really got me thinking, would God ever say something like that if he could? Congratz for making your readers think about such stuff with this piece.

but to answer your question: i like walls. they keep the cave spiders away. if you were a wall, i would be quite disappointed, because i like walls but i don't like you. you're something else. have we looked at the possibility that you're not real?
He didn't like walls but then he came to like them after living in the wild. The question at the end was a really good one.

~Maria.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Thanks! The story that inspired it is very strange.

This seems nice by the way. I like the style it's written, different and kind of unique. Kudos to you two.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Oh, I understand, it's fine. The word itself won't be used, but its meaning will.

@ arthur dent
The origins of the word are Greek, that's why I said it. Of course it deppends on how you two use it in this story.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
It's not the Greek term. It's a variation (a legitimate one) of an English word, psithurism.

psithurisma should be changed to psithirisma if its in Greeklish (which is the Greek language with English characters) and in the Greek form it's ψιθύρισμα.

@ I feel insane
me too tbh i just pulled that stunt out of nowhere and i hope god responds offensively

God seems like a cool guy. I'm interested on his thoughts on Steve's homosexuality and good ol' sex (so many possibilities with this :p)

@ I feel insane
@ arthur dent

damn right im fuunny