i absolutely love this. it's something different and it made me smile. the things you two bring up; well i think i've had those moments too. this is very creative and well-done. keep up the great work!
I liked the lines, i don't know why i created myself. by God and the next chapter where Steve asks if God was real. Don't we all catch ourselves questioning that as well? I think we do.
i might come with you. this world's getting pretty corrupt, isn't it? all these people killing, controlling, destroying as they see fit. i'm not allowed to do anything, either. would you be disappointed if i told you i'm just a wall? i think i would. Seriously that chapter really got me thinking, would God ever say something like that if he could? Congratz for making your readers think about such stuff with this piece.
but to answer your question: i like walls. they keep the cave spiders away. if you were a wall, i would be quite disappointed, because i like walls but i don't like you. you're something else. have we looked at the possibility that you're not real? He didn't like walls but then he came to like them after living in the wild. The question at the end was a really good one.
psithurisma should be changed to psithirisma if its in Greeklish (which is the Greek language with English characters) and in the Greek form it's ψιθύρισμα.
you know me so well bub