Time Bomb - Comments

I wonder if Charlotte will really warm up to Chase. They'd make a very cute couple. Post soon.

Chapter fourteen was great, I like how the information was given to Charlotte while I could read Chase's thoughts. Nice one. :)

There's only one thing I can say and that's that it keeps getting better and better.

This is good. I like the aspect of this story and how you go around this arranged marriage while not focusing on a highschool arranged marriage on the level of quizilla stories. Keep going girls.

So you decided to bring Dimitris in to the game, huh? I like the turn of events. I'm waiting to see what you'll come up with next. c:

I still can't believe she hasn't figure out that they're vampires or that they haven't told her. You think you should let her know instead of having her find out the hard way.

I still can't believe she hasn't figure out that they're vampires or that they haven't told her. You think you should let her know instead of having her find out the hard way.

I love the pillow fight. It sounds like something I would do. X3

I loved the update and I can't wait to read more into the story and what's going on between Chase and charlotte... :)

I like were this is going, post soon. :)

I like how the story is developing. c:

I love this, I don't read to many arranged marriages so this is really different for me. I really like the characters and how they act towards each other. I liked the description as well. Overall this was a good read!

I loved the update and I can't wait until I can read more!

This is nice. The layout/banner is amazing and I absolutely love it. I like the whole thing!
And the descriptions in the fifth chapter were well done. I want that house.

Great chapter! :D It was so worth the wait. :)

I can't wait until you update! I love the new chapter and I think you did a fantastic job at writing Chases POV and I look forward for more!

I can't wait until you update! I love the new chapter and I think you did a fantastic job at writing Chases POV and I look forward for more!

Aw c: thanks for the little special thanks that was sweet. I'm really loving the new POV too :)

I really like the new update and I think you did a very good job on writing Chase's POV!

I like it. It's interesting to see what's pushing Chase to do this. :3