Fireworks and Candlelight - Comments

Man, Jackie is horrible.
I wanna knock some sense into her.
More soon?

I finished the update about an hour ago, but Harmony still needs to read and approve. :cute:
She's probably in bed now though, so expect an update tomorrow. Hopefully in the morning (for us. night for US people XD), 'cause I'm away for the rest of the day. If not in the morning, definitely in the evening. :cute:

I LOVE this story!
It's original
really sad, though, but romantic ;]
more soooon

Wow, I just covered all 10 chapter in 30 minutes. And I loved every second of it. This story is really cute. I loved the way you made the decision to have Frank with kids and discover he was gay and most importantly, be a man and tell his wife, to prevent stringing her along. The stories where Frank would cheat on his wife with a man are getting old, ya know? So, I definitely liked the change.

And the whole setting you have with Gerard being the physiotherapist, its beyond cute. Its very symbolic of their up-coming relationship - this whole Gerard helping him not only to rediscover himself, happiness and love, but he's gonna be helping him physically, mentally and emotionally through this.

I'm subscribing straight after the comment. Frankly, this story deserves morestalkers commenters and readers.

Although take care with the dialogue where you have to capitalize the first sentence of their speech that I noticed sometimes wasn't done:

E.g

Quote

I chuckled, “see if you say that after our session,” I walked to the door...

I chuckled. "See if you say that after our session", I walked to the door...

More soon? :arms:

Marij:

:yah That was freaking amazing.
They made me "aww", they're so cute. :tehe:

That was so close, I was seriously on the edge of my seat. For a second there, I thought you were going to have them get caught. :XD

bit early for that... :tehe:

:yah That was freaking amazing.
They made me "aww", they're so cute. :tehe:

That was so close, I was seriously on the edge of my seat. For a second there, I thought you were going to have them get caught. :XD

this story just gets better and better each and every update! i just hope they can keep it professional when they need to remain professional and then behind closed doors, what the hell does it matter!? that was close! my gosh...wow.

Awww, that chapter was adorable. It was too cute, honestly. Good that it cheers up Frank as well. :]

Gahh how can something be so amazing!
I loved it!
More soon?

awesome update

hope you enjoy it when you get back Marij :)

Okay. I'm only on chapter three, so far.
But I had to comment.
I know Jacquie is only six, but that's exactly why I would slap her if she were my child! Swearing and talking to her father like that. AT SIX YEARS OLD.
My my. This is good so far, btw.

EDIT: Okay, now on chapter five. Jackie continued, “I hate him for killing Aaron and Ashley.”
Is she STUPID?! It's HER fault for jumping out of the fucking car!
God. It should have her who died.

EDITx2: Now I'm fully caught up! And I love it! It's so amazing.

aww that was so touching, that last line made me melt, it really did! =]

Awwww. You have a real knack for makin me feel super bad for Frank's situation.

But it was totally gone by the end of the chapter. I just got a warm feeling in my heart, and now I just feel really cheerful. That was so cute. :]

oh my god!
YAY!
THEY KISSED!
I knew that Frank was gay!
Because Jamia didn't go crazy when they got a divorce!
Haha more soon?

Harmony77uk:

Well, you already know what I think, lol... but, anyway...
Fab update and one will be waiting for you on return :)
Enjoy the break and I bet you return in a better state than I was this morning... haha...

I'm not too sure about that. :lmfao
The last evening is just drinking 'till you pass out, pretty much :XD
And read my journal to know what I'm like when I get back. :lmfao

But I can't wait for your update

this is an amazingly written story i feel bad for both frank and jamia for losing two children as for that third one she should be happy that her father survived.
Frank shouldnt give up hope and as for gerard he is kind and sweet something that frank will need

and to date this is the longest comment that i ever made i think

ps happy birthday!

Annistheshit:

Harmony77uk:

Woo, popping the cherry

Original fic from you? Cool!

It all seems good to go, off you go :P

Happy Birthday!

Thank you <3

Well, you already know what I think, lol... but, anyway...
Fab update and one will be waiting for you on return :)
Enjoy the break and I bet you return in a better state than I was this morning... haha...

Harmony77uk:

Woo, popping the cherry

Original fic from you? Cool!

It all seems good to go, off you go :P

Happy Birthday!