Fireworks and Candlelight - Comments

Harmony77uk:

Marij:

Like I said,
I feel sooo bad for Frankie and Jamia.
We're so mean doing this to them. :lmfao

being mean to my characters comes naturally to me... should I worry about that??

Marij:

Heh, I'm still really really really happy I asked you to write this with me. Couldn't have done it this awesome without you. :cute: :arms:

don't be so hard on yourself, it would have been awesome even if you kept it to yourself :cute:
Look at Hear Me... 10 stars, go you... I am struggling for 5... mutter...
Glad I am doing this with you though 'cos ILY!! :arms:

:lmfao
You shouldn't feel bad about it, 'cause you're totally awesome at it. :tehe:

Hah, yeah, I'm still not over the fact that Hear Me has so many stars.It's so mind blowing.
You're just under appreciated. :arm:s

Marij:

Like I said,
I feel sooo bad for Frankie and Jamia.
We're so mean doing this to them. :lmfao

being mean to my characters comes naturally to me... should I worry about that??

Marij:

Heh, I'm still really really really happy I asked you to write this with me. Couldn't have done it this awesome without you. :cute: :arms:

don't be so hard on yourself, it would have been awesome even if you kept it to yourself :cute:
Look at Hear Me... 10 stars, go you... I am struggling for 5... mutter...
Glad I am doing this with you though 'cos ILY!! :arms:

poor frankie, if that were me, i'd feel totally guilty too.
i like how frank and gerard don't immediately have feelings for each other too, that's a good idea because most frerards do move a bit too fast.
Love x♥x

Like I said,
I feel sooo bad for Frankie and Jamia.
We're so mean doing this to them. :lmfao

Heh, I'm still really really really happy I asked you to write this with me. Couldn't have done it this awesome without you. :cute: :arms:

YES! An update!

A crystalline tear trailed down my cheek, immediately followed by more.
“Yeah, just you cry, Dad,” I heard Jacqueline spit, “this is your fault.”

“Jackie!” Jamia gasped.

“It is, Mom. It really is,” Jackie continued, “I hate him for killing Aaron and Ashley.”

Holy jesus! That girl is just so... I wonder where she even gets her meanness from. It's clearly not from either parent... jeeeeeeeeeez. She really annoys me.

And then Dr. Way! Yay! xD I hope Frank gets better and can walk again. With Gerard's help.

Woooooooooo loved the update! x]

Oooh you know he will make it hurt!!! :naughty:

Good chapter, worth the wait!

yeah, you should, lol

but, hey, I am unpopular too... sniff... SIB lost a star... sulks...

It's probably because I'm not popular and no one ever comes onto my page :lmfao

I should probably update this. >_<

typical, hardly anyone reads my best writing to date... tut... flicks hair and sulks

OMGOMGOMGOMG

I forgot to subscribe. :shifty PLEASE DON'T HATE ME! Dx

So... WHY DID THE GOOD KIDS HAVE TO DIE? Well... at least Frank's okay I guess... I still have kinda mixed feelings about the crash. I want to see where this leads to and stuff. It sounds interesting. Well, it is interesting.

I feel bad for Frank now. I just do... man that crash sounded like it hurt. I hope Frank can walk again. :(

THIS TIME I SHALL DEFINITELY SUBSCRIBE! And then find out the answers to everything in the coming chapters.

x]

PS. You need more comments on this. SHAME ON YOU, NON-COMMENTERS!

:omfg:
I just saw that I hadn't commented your chapter yet. -headdesk-

Anyways,
Even though I knew both would die, I still felt so goddamn sad about it.
I now officially feel guilty for doing this to Frank. :XD

oh my gosh, my heart broke into bits and pieces with this chapter...aaron and ashley gone...my goodness, poor frank and jamia, that's got to be one the worst feelings ever...

wow.

i'm even scared for them!

that was an intense chapter, i swear, this is going to be an amazing story.

my heart seriously was aching at the thought of frankie losing at least one of his babies, if not all or two or even three...just wow.

told you already how much I love this chapter
Words cant do it justice

wow so you guys really deserve more comments for this...

this is amazing! i love the twists already, i love how it's in frank's pov and not gerard's...and the fact that gerard hadn't even been mentioned yet.

jackie's attitude makes me laugh! i love her five-almost-six year old anger towards her dad...at times it is a bit mature for a five/six year old but hey, it works, it really does.

i can't wait for more! i think this is a great start and i really hope everyone's okay!!

Bad Luck.:

HELLO!

:tehe:

So... I didn't really have time to check this out, I did read it, probably not thoroughly enough to write a real comment. But I love where this is going. And that little Jackie girl, wow, what a bitch. And only at 6? Yeesh, I'd like to know where this is going.

I thought the first chapter was a good one, lots of people lose readers because of the first chapter, but I thought it was really good. And cute. With Aaron. Not Jackie. 'Cause little girls shouldn't know how to say "I hate you" to their fathers.

Going to read the rest later. ^__^ Great starts, though.

Thank you :) At last, a real comment!

And.... um... yeah... Frank dolesn't actually wind up pregnant :P well he might now... :naughty:

HELLO!

:tehe:

So... I didn't really have time to check this out, I did read it, probably not thoroughly enough to write a real comment. But I love where this is going. And that little Jackie girl, wow, what a bitch. And only at 6? Yeesh, I'd like to know where this is going.

I thought the first chapter was a good one, lots of people lose readers because of the first chapter, but I thought it was really good. And cute. With Aaron. Not Jackie. 'Cause little girls shouldn't know how to say "I hate you" to their fathers.

Going to read the rest later. ^__^ Great starts, though.

I hope so :grr:

Marij:

FROM US

hahahaha :lmfao

Ah but we are chatting anyway, lol...

Will anybody ever join us???

FROM US

hahahaha :lmfao