Darkfall - Comments

I keep getting stuck in this story every time you update. You know that? Well now you know.

But let me talk about the emotions you portray, poor baby doesn't even know! I'd love to find out what happened to the mom, and Karl Jr. really needs love.

As always you're updates are amazing!

"I'm sorry, God. I didn't mean to go to sleep," he whispered into the dark.
Man that really got to me!

Okay, so this chapter was short, and I'm sorry I took so long to comment, but yeah...it still impacted your process a lot. Now I'm starting to see what kind of man Wes' father is, whoa. I really hope you update soon!

"He's a dirty ragamuffin," one little girl whispered.

Wow, I'd totally smash that kid, kids are ruthless! By the way, I love the layout for this too.

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"Where is your backpack?" Callie asked. Wesley stared down at the table, not knowing how to answer.

Cole frowned, shaking his head at his sister. "Here Wesley, we can share."

Wow, okay, so Callie and Cole obviously are very sympathetic and amazing children, no wonder their father didn't want to take them to school. They are precious.

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"I see the moon and the moon sees me. The moon sees the somebody I'd like to see. God bless the moon and God bless me. God bless the somebody I'd like to see."

So I have to ask, is this a real song? If so can you tell me the artist, if not, then wow you're just amazing!

This is really, really good! I hope you continue this, and I really want to know where you're going with this. Also the layout and font type you used is really freaking great too! Kudos!