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  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ AJ9 @ Synful_Shadows @ jasper_girl @ fantasygirltexas @ Evyliz15 @ fiction246 @ HanerJoy @ rachthebat. @ YourLoveIsMyLifeline

    Mel definitely gives off bad vibes! Not sure what will happen with her in the future, but there is something seriously off kilter with her. Poor Jake's reaction to the lady from the adoption agency is very understandable, it's a good thing she was so understanding of his behavior. As far as who he will be more afraid of when it comes to Zacky and Johnny, we'll find out in the next chapter. @AJ9 I had never thought about it too much about whether or not I would bring the abuser into it, but I'm definitely thinking about that now! Thanks!

    Jimmy could very well end up being a good fit with Jake in the future, but then again Jake hasn't really gotten to know him all that well yet. I guess we'll have to wait and see Smile

    There ALWAYS has to be some sexytime! It's an important factor in any intimate relationship (at least that's my perspective lol). There will be plenty more to come. After all, Jake has now slept through the night so there's a possibility he will continue to do so in the future. He's also definitely a cutie and they are turning into quite a beautiful family.

    Thank you all for the wonderful comments!! You're feedback means so much to me and I feel bad that it took me so long to get back to you. I hope I touched on all of your responses in my reply. I will be posting the next chapter up momentarily.

    P.S. @ rachthebat. Is it weird that every time I write a sex scene I think about what you would think of it? Very Happy
    May 2nd, 2014 at 02:09am
  • YourLoveIsMyLifeline

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    I love this story, it's so good :D
    March 29th, 2014 at 03:32pm
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    I'm so glad Jake managed to sleep through the night, that's a huge accomplishment for them all! I felt so bad for him when the adoption lady came by though, poor little bub! It will get easier, as he sees that no one will take him away, he'll relax more.

    I'm so glad he finally warmed up to Jimmy!! I have a weird feeling about his girlfriend, though. I don't know what it is, but I think she might cause problems for Jimmy's friendships in the future. I might be wrong, but she gives me a bad vibe!

    The little family outing was just the cutest!! So sweet. The image of Brian carrying a sleeping Jake, just does things to me! Haha

    And now onto other things that Brian does..I love how you manage to squeeze in some dirty hot sex action! Haha. My lady parts like that very much lmfao
    March 27th, 2014 at 03:15am
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    I think he reacted like that with the person from the adoption agency, because he knows that some kids don't stay forever in the houses and are moved away. And to Jimmy I knew he was gonna like him :D who wouldn't like him?? :D out of Zacky and Johnny Ithink she might like Johnny more because of the mowhak, he did like Matt's mowhak after all. And I hope Mel is not one of this jealous girls, she knows they are friends, so she shouldn't be jealous.
    March 24th, 2014 at 06:45pm
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    I can't remember if I said it but I thought it was going to be either Jimmy's blue eyes that would freak him out or Zacky's green eyes so well shall see if I'm right about Zacky...

    No one better try and take him away!!!! Can't wait for more :)
    March 24th, 2014 at 08:11am
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    I live how they still manage to have sex without waking Jacob ip lol
    March 24th, 2014 at 03:10am
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    I'm so glad you updated! It makes me smile that he likes jimmy. I fear that he will be afraid of Johnny with his Mohawk.
    March 23rd, 2014 at 09:10pm
  • jasper_girl

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    Love how he connected with Jimmy. Just hope he gets along with Zacky and Johnny as well. Please update again soon.
    March 23rd, 2014 at 08:10pm
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    I think Jake is going to be so attached to Jimmy in the future because Jimmy is like a kid at heart and can kinda understand Jake. I got a weird vibe from Jimmy's girlfriend, I can't describe it but it's there. I hope that Jake won't be scared of Johnny & Zacky but u never know. He could be scared of Zacky more then Johnny especially if he still has the piercings.

    I can understand Jakes little freak out with the adoption lady, because he thought that she was there to take him away from Brian and Mia. I just hope this little family can move forward.

    I can't wait for the next update xx
    March 23rd, 2014 at 05:45pm
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    I'm glad that Jake reacted well to Jimmy. I was scared that he'd be really afraid of him. I'm not so sure about Mel. I get a really weird vibe from her. Not sure why. I can understand completely, Jake's reaction to the lady from the adoption agency. It didn't surprise me at all.

    Out of Zacky and Johnny, I'm not sure who will scare Jake. I hope that neither of them will be too scary for him really. I'm kind of looking forward to finding out what happened to Jake to make him so scared in the first place. I know he's been abused, but I'm not sure of the extent. He's probably been sexually abused and there's definitely some sort of physical abuse because of the bruises. Sounds like emotional abuse too. He's really been through a lot, the poor little mite. I'm glad he's happy with Mia and Brian.

    Will you be introducing the abuser into the story? That would really make for some excellent drama.

    Hope you can update this incredible story again really soon. xx Mr. Green
    March 23rd, 2014 at 05:29pm
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    @ NeverWakeMeUp
    Woot! Haha

    It's okay, take as long as you need, I'm in the same boat, haha. I've got like a million stories to update and only one pair of hands XD
    March 22nd, 2014 at 04:45pm
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    @ NeverWakeMeUp
    I'm really glad about that. You've just made my day cos I love this story so much. I was only thinking the other day that you hadn't updated in a while. I'm really looking forward to more of this lovely story. Xx
    March 22nd, 2014 at 04:25pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ rachthebat.
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    Thanks so much! About halfway through the next chapter now, hoping to have it up today or tomorrow! Sorry for the wait!!
    March 22nd, 2014 at 12:40pm
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    Thanks so much! About halfway through the next chapter now, hoping to have it up today or tomorrow! Sorry for the wait!!
    March 22nd, 2014 at 12:40pm
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    @ NeverWakeMeUp
    It's okay, I'll forgive you, haha.

    I do, it's just one big awesome package of Brian! XD

    I hope so, it must be confusing for the poor little guy too, as well as Brian and Mia. Oh god, me either! And I don't think I would be as strong as he is being, it would break my heart!

    I'll be here, impatiently waiting for more! Haha
    March 15th, 2014 at 04:00pm
  • AJ9

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    I've missed this so much. I hope you can update again really soon as I can't wait to find out what'll happen next. Please update soon xx Mr. Green
    March 9th, 2014 at 10:16pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ rachthebat.
    Glad you enjoyed this chapter. You know how I love to have sweet and loving Brian along with sexy/cocky Brian all at once!

    I think that the tattoos are what are freaking him out for the most part too, but we may discover some other things in the near future as well that set him off.

    Hopefully the little freak out episodes will start to narrow down a little bit too. I can't imagine how hard it would be to be in Brian's place where you want to help a child that you're bonding with like that and they push you away in fear over something that he has no control over.

    Thanks again for reading/commenting and sorry I suck so much at replying lol. Hope to have more posted soon!
    March 9th, 2014 at 08:18pm
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    Thanks so much for all of the wonderful comments! I love reading all of your ideas of how you think Jake is going to react to the rest of the guys! You guys all have a way of making me feel warm and fuzzy inside Very Happy

    Sorry I couldn't get back to everyone individually, I got really backed up lately and I'm hoping to get the next chapter posted for this one soon as well. You guys are the best!
    March 9th, 2014 at 08:11pm
  • Ninjakitty131

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    Hah thanks for the hot chocolate! And I think there still will be a few more difficulties in the future. And I think he'll like Johnny because he's short and has a mohawk(I mean if he does in the story, he may not) but if he does I think he'll like johnny. Jimmy may scare him a little because he's so hyper and active and stuff. Zacky.. I feel like it may be the same with Brian, scared at first but fine once he starts to understand that he won't hurt him. I love this story it's so adorable! Update soon ^.^ <3
    February 3rd, 2014 at 09:24pm
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    Oh, and, thanks for the hot chocolate, it's bloody freezing here! Haha.
    January 27th, 2014 at 12:39am