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  • heretic.

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    That poor boy, how anyone could even think of doing those unspeakable things to a child is beyond me. But I'm glad that the first meeting went well for them all. Brownie points for Brian with the chicken nuggets!

    I love how excited Brian is to be picking things out for Jacob's room, it's adorable! Hahaha, oh my god! The image from Brian begging her in the middle of the store, hilarious!

    Brian running his hand under the blanket is what my boyfriend does with my cat, she goes nuts at him haha. Awww, he's warming up to Brian, I love it :D

    What a lovely start to chapter three tehe

    He also noticed that Brian was always holding Mia’s hand and thought that maybe he was afraid she would get lost if he let her go That is so cute!!

    Ohh, I was so glad to see Jake talking to Brian and happy with him in the studio, I have no idea why he went back into himself. Maybe cause he thought that night time was approaching?

    Help, I've swooned so much I can't get up! Wow, Brian singing to Jake has to be one of the most adorable and lovely things I've ever read! I'm now a puddle of goo on the floor haha.

    I have such a huge smile on my face reading that Jake talked to Brian again, so cute! Cute

    The trip to the zoo was perfect, that little boy is so cute! I think they will suffer a few setbacks when he meets the other guys, especially Matt cause he's just so huge haha. Hopefully, Mia and Brian will be able to show him that not everyone with tattoos will hurt him. Poor bubba.

    I've fallen head over heels in love with this here story, it's so good! I love love love it! :D

    More soon please tehe
    January 8th, 2014 at 02:43pm
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    Jesus H Christ, you certainly know how to start a story off with a bang! Bloody hell, that was hot! I'll be honest, I'm not very fond of femmeslash but with Brian added into the mix, it definitely spiced it up! For me anyway haha. I've read the first chapter, I'll have to come back to the rest of the story later but I'll be back! *in Arnie voice* haha. Can't wait for them to meet the little boy! :D
    January 7th, 2014 at 07:49am
  • CiaraVengeance

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    Found two months and just started reading this, the characters in general have such good depth that I can actually feel with them. Brian singing to him was literally the cutest thing ever. I really enjoy this story, keep up the good work! :)
    January 4th, 2014 at 11:06pm
  • Ninjakitty131

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    Aw Brian singing is adorable <3 I'm so glad he's starting to warm up to the, but I feel like he'll be scared when he meets Matt... And maybe Zacky. But I love the profess he's making, but I'm expecting a turn of events eventually.. Lol update soon! :)
    January 4th, 2014 at 10:26am
  • Lady_Dee11

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    This update was just to sweet, I got teary when Brian was singing to Jake. Sweetest moment ever! I'm loving the progress that Jake is making. I can't wait for more. Very Happy
    January 3rd, 2014 at 07:49pm
  • MrsChristX

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    Awww that was so cute between brian and jake, its good thay he is opening up to brian and mia. loved it Again cant wait for next update
    January 3rd, 2014 at 05:03pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ HanerJoy
    Glad you enjoyed it! I almost started crying while I was writing it LOL. I think ultimately he'll be alright too, we'll probably start seeing his reactions to the other guys in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and commenting!

    @ Evyliz15
    Haha, yes you are! Thanks for reading!!

    @ fiction246
    I think you might be right! But which one will it be that scares him the most? Hmmmm LOL. Thanks for reading and commenting!!

    @ pekigirl
    Thanks so much!! I almost cried when I wrote the part about Brian singing! Hopefully he'll keep opening up to Brian even more and start talking to Mia more frequently too. Thanks for reading and commenting!!

    @ blairanderson
    I'm glad they got the other therapist too. I think they'll start making more progress now as well. Hopefully he'll keep talking more now, hopefully since Patches likes Mia and Brian, Jake will think they're OK too haha. Thanks for reading and commenting!

    @ AJ9
    Hopefully Jake will continue to keep talking to both of them! He definitely gave in and settled for Brian when Mia forced him to go to her, hopefully they don't do something like that though that he's not quite ready for and set him back! We'll find out which one(s) of the guys Jake has an issue with in the next couple of chapters. Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!!

    @ fantasygirltexas
    Glad you liked the lullabye! Writing that part in almost made me tear up too! Hopefully he'll keep talking and making more progress! Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!
    January 3rd, 2014 at 04:07pm
  • fantasygirltexas

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    The lullaby seriously made me tear up. It makes me so happy when they maje progress with jake and I'm so glad he finally talked to Mia!!!
    January 3rd, 2014 at 01:39pm
  • AJ9

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    It was just so adorable how he let Brian hold him even though he was scared. I'm glad he talked again - and to Mia too Mr. Green. I have a suspicion that he's going to freak out when he meets the rest of the guys though, as I'm guessing one of them may bare some small resemblance to one of his former foster parents. I hope that he keeps making progress though. He seems like a really cute kid.

    Please update again as soon as you can. I'm addicted to this story. It's really gripping Mr. Green
    January 3rd, 2014 at 01:15pm
  • blairanderson

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    That lullaby was so sweet! I'm glad that they got another therapist and got more insight on what's going on with Jake. He spoke to Mia!! And at least there are no hard feelings from Patches. (: this update rocked. I loved all of the feels.
    January 3rd, 2014 at 01:06pm
  • pekigirl

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    omg the feelings ahaffafajajaha when brian sang to jake and held him in his arms and he just felt asleep awwww omg that was so adorable and I actually cried! :') loved it
    and I love that he talked to brian again and then to mia xD and the monkey thing awe I caaan't!
    what a precious chapter
    January 3rd, 2014 at 11:07am
  • fiction246

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    I'm glad that he is talking more and opening up. I think potentially one of the guys might remind him of someone and make him clam up...I dont know...I'm glad that he has opened up to Brian more :)
    January 3rd, 2014 at 09:20am
  • Evyliz15

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    Woo im in the list of awesome lol i get excited over weird things
    January 3rd, 2014 at 07:38am
  • HanerJoy

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    omg you made me cry, I was in full tears. He talked more :D he talked :''D and fell asleep on Brian :'') I think they are doing alright :) he will be alright :) and meeting the rest, he might freak out because of so much people with tattoos but when he sees everyone loves him he will feel more at ease :) he's so adorable :D I want to hug him and shower him with kisses :D
    January 3rd, 2014 at 07:06am
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ AJ9 @ fantasygirltexas @ HanerJoy @ blairanderson @ Evyliz15 @ fiction246 @ MrsChristX @ pekigirl

    Yes! He finally talked!! I think the guitar and any type of music in general is going to play a big part in Jake's adjustment to his new life Wink The poor guy has been through so much and he needs a break for once. I think he really is a sweet kid at heart too! Thanks for all of the great feedback! You guys are awesome! Next chapter being posted now!!
    January 3rd, 2014 at 05:31am
  • pekigirl

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    holy shit he talked to brian! maybe because of the music.. maybe there was something related to music in jake's past that makes him more comfortable around brian.. I don't know but I'm curious to find out :) great chapter
    January 2nd, 2014 at 01:56pm
  • MrsChristX

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    aww, poor jake. happy he let brian in but his past is affecting him. love this story. cant wait for next one Smile X
    January 2nd, 2014 at 01:32pm
  • fiction246

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    Poor jake!!! It's so horrible that he has had a bad past and that he is scared of people who only want to love him. It's so sweet that he talked to Brian. Music is obviously a good way to get through to Jake. Looking forward to more :) I love this so far.
    January 2nd, 2014 at 08:01am
  • Evyliz15

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    He talked holy shit he talked ahhhhhh
    January 2nd, 2014 at 07:38am
  • blairanderson

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    I just want to hug Jake ): Poor little guy. It's awesome that he's starting to open up to Brian a little more during the day, even though he comp,Evelyn regresses at night. Hopefully that changes soon. Great update!!
    January 2nd, 2014 at 06:58am