Blood Lust. - Comments

@ jesus christ.
I get the adjective thing, thank you. I assume it's used when describing each of the boys from the other's perspective, yeah? I will look for that from now on. Thank you so much for the comment!

i love blaze and colton's relationship and their individual personalities that are seriously well created.
the only concrit i have is that you use a lot of the same adjectives repeatedly, like "cute" and "weird" especially. maybe just try and switch it up a little more.
too cute though!

@ A. J.
I love reading your comments. They always make me smile. As for the characters, I've been taught that they should surprise even the writer. They do in the best way possible, and I love that about them. I find myself putting myself into this story, so knowing you like a part of my crazy persona means a lot. Thank you for your comment, you're so kind.

YAY AN UPDATE!!!!

Blaze and Colton are adorable. You wrote them having this camaraderie that is sexually explosive and hilariously funny. I thoroughly enjoy their conversations and banter. (this line cracked me up, "A very sexual winky face at that) That's brilliance.

Oh Colton, lmao, that interview. Haha I love a goofy character and you have him down pat. He's so likable and realistic.

Blaze is a smart man. Ex- the penny and the quote about the deck of cards. I love his personality, he's sweet, but sometimes I feel he's dark or has a sad past.

This was a wonderful update. I hope Colton gets the job. *fingers crossed*

Liked your author's note on the bottom.

;) <-----There's MY winky face, anything BUT sexual. xox

@ Don'tFearTheReaper
Aw babe, you are a fabulous writer. I love speculating, so I'll keep that to myself now in case I hit on something, wouldn't want to give it away to others in the comment area. BUT I feel I'm not going to 'get it' or have it 'click' until the very ending. :) You're good at keeping me on my toes. xxx

@ A. J.
Your comment made me cry in the best way possible. You're seriously too kind. Thank you so much, darling.

your first 3 chps are amazing! As a reader, you had me hooked from the start, you just jumped into the story like that. i'm feeling good about Blaze and Colton, but there's something bothering me and I'm not sure what it is. They have a great time together and connected right away, which could come off as creepy, but I don't think that's it. Perhaps the evening news in the 3rd chp put me on pause. Since the main characters backgrounds aren't known yet I don't really have a feel that it's one of them. Maybe Colton's ex? I'll be looking for updates. This is really different and interesting and I really like that i've not read anything like this before.

@ FearTheMotionless
thank you for the comment and rec. it means the world to me. <3

This is really amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter!

@ JamieAllOver.
it never crossed my mind that that could be a cool way to get off... huh. now i'm thinking about it

is Colton going to like get together with Blaze
and then like
admit that he wants Blaze to murder him
as like
a way to get off
bc i read a real-life crime book on a cannibal that was kinda like that but kinda not idk hard to explain

@ JamieAllOver.

haha, yeah it did. the year i was born. i had to do a double take as well

did toy story really come out in '95 bc wow it's older than i am.