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  • FearTheMotionless

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    Blaze and Colt's relationship just gets more and more cute with each update. Still, I can't help but feel like something ominous is lurking in the future...
    August 25th, 2016 at 04:36am
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    @ Don'tFearTheReaper
    I know that hardly happens these days :( mibba used to be so good for that.
    I reckon it's the most realistic story I've ever read including some most YA published ones. And I don't know... your writing is amazing
    June 21st, 2016 at 01:08am
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    @ Purple Daffodil.
    I get it, I really do. I just miss people telling me their favorite parts and people interacting with each other because there was so much care. I don't want to seem like I'm fishing for comments now, I just wish I knew what people liked or disliked about this story.
    June 20th, 2016 at 11:38am
  • herpy berpy.

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    This is my favourite story; it's about the only one I read! Please don't feel discouraged most people are just lurkers these days (:
    June 20th, 2016 at 11:22am
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    @ Sucks For You
    Goodness, you're still so amazing. I can't believe it. There are still people out there who like this story.
    May 12th, 2016 at 06:11am
  • Sucks For You

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    The update was amazing! I could totally see those two eloping. Cant wait for the next one.
    May 11th, 2016 at 07:11pm
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    @ Sucks For You
    You're so amazing, thank you so much. You might have made me cry.
    April 8th, 2016 at 03:38am
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    So I completely ignored my husband all night last night so I could read this story, pretty sure he's actually still mad at me, but that's not the point. The point is that your writing is amazing. I absolutely love how you created two (well three if you count Kris) characters who are so obviously psychopaths, and have somehow managed to make them so relatedable, and just loveable in general. I feel like you characters are so well developed to the point that, for me at least, its so easy to almost forget that the good guys are kind of the bad guys as well. I really hope you continue with this story. I can't wait to seewhat that creative brain of yours has planned for the ending. <3
    April 6th, 2016 at 06:07pm
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    So I completely ignored my husband all night last night so I could read this story, pretty sure he's actually still mad at me, but that's not the point. The point is that your writing is amazing. I absolutely love how you created two (well three if you count Kris) characters who are so obviously psychopaths, and have somehow managed to make them so relatedable, and just loveable in general. I feel like you characters are so well developed to the point that, for me at least, its so easy to almost forget that the good guys are kind of the bad guys as well. I really hope you continue with this story. I can't wait to seewhat that creative brain of yours has planned for the ending. <3
    April 6th, 2016 at 06:06pm
  • A. J.

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    Cute kitty. Happy New Year and belated Merry Xmas to you as well.
    December 31st, 2015 at 05:48pm
  • FearTheMotionless

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    Damn, Kris has a point though.
    The sexual tension is strong and real though
    And happy early birthday, Colton! <3 (since I'm in classes all day tomorrow) Now stop sulking like a kid and accept that you were wrong to an extent!
    October 15th, 2015 at 03:20am
  • A. J.

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    I kissed him against before heading out to my car. Should be I kissed him again before....

    “Far enough.... Should be Fair enough.

    Those are the only two typos I see.
    You've explained Colton's mindset well here. Great update. Curious about Kris though. I'm surprised Blaze mentioned what happened to him. Bring on the next one!
    September 1st, 2015 at 02:09am
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    perfect last chapter:D
    August 16th, 2015 at 11:16am
  • FearTheMotionless

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    Jesus Christ.
    I'll admit, I squeaked a little because I saw that you've updated again (and I didn't know what to expect at the time).

    Colton was serious as fuck, huh?
    I chuckled a little when Blaze gasped though, like yeah, he fucking did it, man.

    This is it. This marks the end of the innocent Colton, and I can only get excited to see how this turns out in the long run ("Will Tate be his only victim" sort of thing.)

    Anyway, loved the update, glad you're back, and I hope your data returns from limbo!
    August 12th, 2015 at 03:19am
  • A. J.

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    @ Don'tFearTheReaper
    I know he loves Blaze. That we know, but what is motivating Colton to be with him? Fear--? since Blaze threatened to kill him? No, I don't think Colton would accept being with a killer. Hell, he didn't want anything to happen to the coach. He's a sweetheart. We've seen him grow and become who he is, but not a 'killer'. It is a reach, but hey, it's your story. I'll continue to read.
    June 16th, 2015 at 03:12am
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    @ A. J.
    Maybe, I don't know, though. I mean, I felt like there were enough red-flags over the last 20 chapters, let alone 95,000 words. But if not, and it does seem sudden, it's something that I will definitely take a look at. For you, does it seem like a terrible jerk from reality? Thank you! <3

    @ Izzy826
    I definitely have been thinking about whether Ander knew (and Kris, as he's Blaze's best friend). Rest assured, that's been in the working for quite a while. Now just to write it out. Thank you for your help!
    June 16th, 2015 at 02:26am
  • A. J.

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    My guess for unsubscribers: Colton's sudden change in character. All along he's been a nice person, yet damaged, that most ppl can relate to. He has morals. Then he's okay being with a murderer? Being with someone who kills just anyone. Who doesn't choose his victims, but at random or ppl that annoy him. I think something in this story is missing and that's the build up to Colton's 'change of heart'. We didn't get to read his thoughts on why he decided to stick with Blaze or why he justifies she should. It skipped over that and ppl may be outraged that 'suddenly' the character that they love has become an enabler. Just my thoughts. PS, sometimes saying they love the person isn't enough of an excuse to stick with someone as proven by unsubscribers. Maybe....?
    June 15th, 2015 at 09:43pm
  • Izzy826

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    Love everything about this story I think it's so interesting and nothing I have read before. Just one thing I would love more of is why did blaze start killing people and did his first husband know about this and was he ok with it
    June 15th, 2015 at 06:41am
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    June 15th, 2015 at 06:41am
  • FearTheMotionless

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    Well, I'm glad that the babes worked it out.
    And well, I'm okay with Tate being holed up and awaiting his deserved death. I did get a small chill up my spine when Blaze asked if he can still kill people (I imagined him asking like a little kid for some ungodly reason), cause I forget that he's a psychotic serial killer under all of the normal qualities. And now COLTON wants to join and murder you-know-who. I really worry for the both of them. Also, you are doing fine, dear! Those three people probably deleted their accounts or something. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! <3
    June 15th, 2015 at 02:02am