You Had Me at "I Hate You" - Comments

Hey, I really really like your story. :)
It's been a while since you finished this story. Please go through it again and edit it a bit. I'm not talking about the plot, I'm talking about small grammatical errors here and there, not much. DO go through Ch.29. And Ch.30 is the previous chapter repeated.
-Thanks. :)

AHHHHHH I loved it!!!!! Harry Potter references cracked me up.

HHAHAHAHA....Okay I just read Ch. 8 and I laughed soooo much!!! WOW. thats funny funny stuff:-D

okay, so i just re-read this whole thing in like, an hour (if you take out the random surfing inbetween xP) and I realized that it's even better than I remember. Although, there is one kind of confusing paragraph at the end of one of the middle-ish chapters, where there's a question mark after every sentence and all the different dialogue is all next to each other...
BUT I STILL LOVE IT!
Just thought I'd go through and re-read your stories again. Starting with this one, and I've already re-read Rose and Ez (can't remember the new title...=3). Next is Robin Hood! Tomorrow or this week, probably.

Sorry for mini-novel, just had to say it xP

I totally just realized that their kids' names are from The Notebook :D

loved this story sooo much!!

Omg, its amazing..... I love it!!! =)

Amazing, this has to be...No this is the best story i`ve read on mibba. Amazing

OK so wow! I finished this story when you finished writing it but now I'm reading time lifts the light and decided to reread this one. It seems to get better every time I read it! (Came back after the Linc and Jesse salon scene in "time" lol epic!)

I reread this story and i love lvoe love it!! But there was a funky mistake there was one story published twice (chapters 29 and 30) and then in the last section of both of them there are no spaces between the paragraphs and like a bunch of question marks. Sorry if these corrections sound annoying but i thought u might want to know...

THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY!!! :O *calm down* XD
It is so well written and i loved every second! finished it really quickly cause i couldn't look away from chap1!
xx

AWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH such a sweet story!! :D
well. i'm gonna read more of your stories now.
i would rate it like 10 stars. but i'm like new to mibba and i have no idea how xP

Thank God!
They were starting to piss me off well Vi was with all the denying and being a bitch but at least it had a great ending!

*screams* I read this on quizilla, stories like yours where one of the reasons I wanted to stay...thank god you came here!! I'm going to read it ALL over again. <3

now i want to name my kids Noah and Ally xD

i thought i'd let you know that chapters 29 and 30 are the same. o:

xDD!
I think Chapter 8 might be my favorite. lol.

so i needed a story to read while eating cookies and cream ice cream.
and i decided to re-read one of your stories. and i chose this one.
it was between this, Robin Hood, or Fangs. xD
I'm going to re-read all of them though.
:P

LOVE YOUR STORY!

dude! this story was beyond awesome! Quizilla SUCKS! I have an account, but me and my friend moved here! HAGS everyone! *Have A Great Summer*