You Had Me at "I Hate You" - Comments

Some people fall in love at, "Hello."

I think you should change it too 'Some people fall in love at first sight' because that fits more, in my opinion. 'Cause no one seriously falls in love at Hello, you have to get to know a person first. And you can't judge a book by its cover, so changing it would seem appropiate. Thought, it's your call and maybe 'fall in love at 'Hello' was your plan or whatever.

ok propbely really late to comment but this story is honestly the best i've ever read!! i loved ever minute of it, it got into my real emotions i felt her feelings and the story wasn't predictble at all! ugh i can't say enough but i have to stop. BEST STORY EVER!:)

This may not mean anything to you, but I remember reading this story on quizzilla over a year ago. I still love it now as much as I loved it then. I saw your username and remembered you, so I clicked onto your page and there it was: this story. HAHA! Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I love this story (:

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Hey, officaly one of the best stories i have read on mibba!! Got so disracted my tea went cold! Great story!!!

this has to be the cutest story ever!!!! i love it
your r such a good author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fantastic job!!

on quizillla there was an epilouge right?? here are some of my favorite parts only some tho

"NO!" I shouted again. "Seriously! Why does everyone feel the need to take their pants off today?"

I was praising the Lord that it was dark, so he couldn't see how closely my face resembled a tomato wearing Ronald McDonald's clown wig.

"What the hell was that?" Jesse exclaimed, dropping his jaw.

"It was... Um... Linc's New Year's present?" I tried feebly.
Jesse didn't buy it. He raised an eyebrow, his eyes flitting from me, to Linc, and back again.

"Best present ever!" Linc whispered to Jesse.

Lincoln rushed over, grabbed the sides of Jesse's face, and planted a big kiss on his forehead, complete with a "Mmmmwah!" Then he grabbed the remote, shoved Jesse out of the way, scrambled over the back of the couch, landed directly on top of an already disgruntled Gavin, and clicked the T.V. to FOX. Gavin elbowed Linc off him. The theme song for House had just begun.

"He's gone in to cardiac arrest!" a blonde doctor shouted.
"CPR! CPR!"
"Commence ventricular fibrillation!"

"HEY!" Linc roared. Everyone froze.
"I'm okay!" he reassured everyone. "I just took the finger thingy off."

A few of the doctors stormed out, grumbling.

"Young man!" Laverne screeched. "Put your finger thingy back on!"
Linc slipped it on, wearing a scowl.

"Okay. Well, in that case, you remember that dress you wore to your cousin's wedding?"
"Yeah?"
"It made you look pregnant."
Naomi gasped.
"Nine months."

Naomi clasped her hands over her mouth, and her eyes widened in shock. It was as if he'd given her a death-threat.

And if the world suddenly turned black and white... I think that that one kiss would be in color.

I want a kiss like that =) I've oficially finished the marathon. wow =)

And he had nice abs...

heehee ;) I really like this one better then I remember.

And he had nice abs...

heehee ;) I really like this one better then I remember.

Woahh, I read this story on Quizilla a while back, and I just had to read it again on here. I loved all your Author's Notes on Quzilla, too!
You should do tyat on here. :)

I read this story before, maybe on Quizilla, back in March (i think). And I still remember it and love it.

Oh... and again... with the not doing assignment....
Ahaha
:D

GLEEP!

That was sooooooooooooo cute!
:D

amazing
is there a sequel to this

Ahhh that was the cutest end!

Hey!
I don't know what the clock is with you, but here with me it's half two at night. And I've just read your story and I couldn't do anything about it; the tears just rolled down my cheeks at the last chapters. I've read your stories on Quizilla, but when I found out that you was a member here I just had to read all your stories again. Personally I think this is your best story! When you become an famous author I'm going to buy all your books =)

Hugs <3

You know what I fianlly sat down and read You Had Me At I Hate You and honestly it was one of the best stories I have ever read....and I've read alot. God, I hope it really gets published, for real...it would be like a best seller.

BEST CHAPTER EVER!!! I LOVED IT!!! ur an awesome writer.

BEST EVER CHAPTER BEST EVER>>>> I LOVE YOUR STORIES

Oh! i loved it! just like all your other stories that i've read!!! it was amazing!! your stories never let me down! You are amazing!