that was such a sad ending!!!!! but i have to be honest, since your updates were so far inbetween, i cant really remember wat happened in the rest of the story. i love your style though!!!!!
im frigging crying here!!!! NOOOOOOOOOO SHE CANT BE GONE!!! NO NO NO!!!..... *cries even more!!*... honestly this is my fave story ever and i dont wnat it to end!!! i love it!!!!...... NOW WHERES MY BLODDY SEQUEL!!!!!! i need more!!!!! AND QUICK LOZZIEPOP!!!!!!!!!!
*cries*... swannykinpop is in love with this story!!!... its my fave one ever!!!! love love love it!!!! WOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more more more!!!!!!!!!
HOLY SHIZZLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! man i loved that!!!!......... poor david and poor Frankie..... :(...awwwww!!!!....... more soon please!!! i wanna see what happens next!!!!!!!.....
okay, guys? i've decided to lower the number of comments again (courtetsy of swanny *huggles swanny*) to 60 instead of 70. you need 8 more comments for your sequel, so read and comment!
HOLY SHIT LOZZIEPOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i fooking love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (sorry i forgot to comment!!!! i had read it lol:P)... LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!! MORE MORE MROE!!! and hurry up with chapter 18 woman!!!!! hehe!!!!!
guys you're only getting 3 more chapters out of me. i wrote the last chapter already, and 18 and 19 are coming up fast. that means you have about a week to get from 50 comments to 70 (which you won't do coz this story's shit) coz i already have an idea for a sequel so if you guys wanna read then COMMENT! please?
Chapter 16 is cool. I don't like the dream though. Poor David. That bits just awful. You need to put the next chapter up, even though i've already read most of it. By the way a good idea for the end.
*teary eyes* BECKY! did u guys see her comment!? so purtiful... *hehe* anyways, ive had an idea. if u guys can get this comment counter up to 75 by the end of the story, u get ur sequel. if not, ill leave u hangin at the end *grins* tell all ur friends! muhahahaha