White Roses Fade to Black - Comments

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i never know where this storys gonna go lol

*happy sigh* i really love this.. its my kind of story. totally faultless.

i have got to say this is one of the best stories that Loz has ever written. it's also the most depressing story she's ever written but it works. It's so easy to connect with the characters, you can go along with the story. I felt so sad for Lucie, Callum, David and Lesley having to deal with Mike's death and poor Lucie getting all the shit at home too. Well there we go, that's what i think.

wow, quick update, really, really, good, i would greatly appreciate it if you read my story as it also has an abusive father, and i need some feedback. cheers!

ditto

ah wow loving the update, but I DONT WANT LUCIE TO GO OUT WITH FREDDIE!!!!!!!!!!! she should be with david!!!

must we keep telling you it's amazing?

part 14 is up and coming guys. first oart is stringing out a bit so u might be in luck wth a long chapter

its so sad. :[
this is a really great story!!

i kno that like you havent been wanting to write it cause u think no one will read ur stuff.
but just keep writing, cause its good.
and other ppl think it too...now you have to believe it. :]

lucie did nothing to david... yet ¬¬. shit i just gave the plot away. shame *grins*

lozziepop!!!!! wheeeeeeeeeeee..... i love it!!!!... how could lucie do that to david:(:(:[..... awwww... yeeeeeeey you got readers!!! and i love them!!! haha,....

whoa dude new readers! fuck me! i'll update that part 13 right now!

i love the writing style, reminds me of my own..
can't wait to read what happens next!

aww cute :]

this is the best story ive read yet on mibba; its so incredibly creative, original and powerful. your plotline is excellent, you get the audience involved in story... please keep writing! i have subscribed and want to read the next chapter!!!!!!

i like it! yeh when i comment i comment shit lol

woah!!!! get better soon david!!!!.... awwwwwwww.... more more more!!!!....

attempting part 12. not in any particular mood so i dunno how it'll turn out. apologies if its shit

argggggggggghhhhhhhhh!!!!! OMG!!!! this is soo sad!!! i love it!!!!! more more more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!:P:P:P wheeeeeee i love it!!!!!!!!

i live over my dads now so ill update on mondays and sundays. im sorry! *cries*