SO much Drama....it's dripping with it. I LOVE IT! Poor Billie nothing ever seems to go right for him...there is always something. aww Plus Thanks for an update, I've been left to twiddle my thumbs in suspense..
:x she wasn't supposed to see that oops. :x Awesome update. While reading I just felt this rage in the air o.o Damn. I'd be so scared of Billie. Pissing him off is not an option :x
Fuck fuck fuck! That white peace of trash Lani! Omg, wtf's wrong wiht her?! I wanna chop her head off! And grrrrr.. Billie defending Jazz is so hot! I love them both, I wonder what he would do to Lani if he catches her, that slut better watch her back -.- I love this... I demand another update! Please? *puppy face*.
I freaking LOVED this! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! So cute! Go Billie and Jazz! :D *does happy dance*. You, my friend, are an incredible genius! Damn it! How can Billie be so sweet?! It kills me how much he cares about her! (In a good way lol). And the final sentence was like amazing *dreamy eyes then melts*. Update! I demand one! ♥
I realize I'm getting a little redundant, but I must say it again--you are positively brilliant! I absolutely adore this story and it makes my day every time I get the little e-mail notification that you posted a new chapter. You have a wonderful way with words, and your dialogue always sounds (or, er, reads) so realistic and true-to-life. I love how you switch perspectives between Jazz (who I love--when you did the time-jump, I think I actually said out loud, "Yes! They can finally be together!!"...yes, I'm weird) and Billie, and you're able to write each personality so distinctly from the other. The last few chapters especially have had me repeatedly going, "Awww!!!"--again, I must compliment you for being able to do sweet and romantic without veering into the cheesy cliché.
So anyway, the whole purpose of my long, rambling comment--bravo! Keep writing!!
I don't know why you don't have more comments than you do. I've just sat and read every chapter....it's actually brilliant. Your writing just seems so real <3
OMG O.O I missed this story so much! and wow. O.O it was so sweet and the way you wrote it... wow. It's so amazing and they're so cute ^^ You rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D
Omg! My internet was messed up for the last three weeks and I missed the last four chapters! *cries*. I absolutely loved the "kiss scene" holy God, the way you described everything! I had goose bumps not just Jazz XD It's about time! Till chapter 33 I was like, when's it gonna happen?! When's it gonna happen?! I was more nervous than Billie was but what he remembered about her having cold and bringing the movie "Yellow Submarine"... Soooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!! I LOVE this story! Ooooh, and Lani is such a slut! She deserves what he did to her, thinking she can mess with Billie like that -.- But he showed that pethatic bitch :D Go Billie and Jazz! Please please update soon! *gets down on knees* :P