Christie Road - Comments

"...less than ten minutes to check out." I wonder why he was in such a hurry ]x->
Billie's not homeless anymore! : D : D : D

I've got a feeling that Lani won't give up on Billie so easily and she already hates Jazz so :x
haha xD Billie left her : D : D : D
Awesome update! ^^

Your story is just amazing. I mean, wow. All of the things that you describe in the simplest yet most intricate ways--
I'm kinda jealous, lol.
Can't wait for the next update.

*sigh*
if you were a guy, i'd so marry you...
"a melancholy vignette"??? really???
hope you don't mind, but i'm gonna steal that
gorgeous writing, love
okay, maybe i should stop babbling cuz i just sounded british for a minute there

AAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! I fucking missed three chapters!!!! God damn it! Okay, *takes a deep breath*.. First, awwwwwww!!!!!!! The closure of the last chapter was soooo beautiful! So was the walk on the beach, come on Beej! We all know Jazz's the one for ya! Here's your big break, you're sleeping in her living room for the love of God! *Sings* Go Beej, do your thang... lolz. I LOVE this story! More more more Lee!!!!

Aw! that was so sweet! : D
It was really, really awesome! ^^

FUCK YEAH!
that was awesome!
i think i wanna hump this story...and you too. in a non-creepy way

That was so cool! ^^ I guess they'll see each other much more often. yay! hehe xD throwing away the phone was cool : D I might try it once : D

Woo Hoo! Oh my God! I'm so excited about this! He was humming at the end? Sooooo cute! If just talking to her made him this happy, how about actually seeing her?! I'm dying to find out what's gonna happen on the date! Again, AMAZING writing! The way you described everything in this chapter was almost like I can actually see it. Anyway, looking forward for more! ALL HAIL YOU!!!!!!

*Sighs* Lani, Lani, Lani *brings her broom and starts beating the crap out of her* DIE DIE DIE bitch! *Billie spots me* O.o RUN! Huh, wait, what's he doing? Is that a broom in his hand too?! Is he here to help? *Both of us start pounding on Lani* She's dead.. *wipes forehead, Billie hits me with his broom*. Me: What was that for?! Him: Sorry, I was just in the zone. Me: Why you little... Run Billie run! Jess with a broom on the loose! Okay, I love this! FINALLY! Thank God for Billie dumping that bitch! But I know she's not gonna give up that easy, I see right through her -.- But hey, my broom's all set, you know, just in case she comes back for more ^-^

They were never meant to be...
And she is shallow, plastic doll! : < I don't like Lani at all : <
Still I wonder what else will she do to get Billie back... make him 'realize' he was 'wrong'. ]x-> Girls can be so evil...

yay!
don't make me get all black hawk on your ass! lol

Oh snap! Lani just made me madddddd.

More soon!!

Dun dun dun dun... And the drama begins! Did I ever mention you're like my favorite writer EVER?! I freaking love this! In your face Lani! Haha, I never liked her anyway, she's so needy and clingy. Go Jazz! I know there's something going on between her and Billie and NO not that "brotherly love". I guess we'll see. Update soon please :D I'm ready to beg, really :)

awesomeness, awesomeness!
hope Lani chokes on her pink fluff and dies
did i mention "Go Jazz!"?

Holy crap! Jazz is SO cool! You made her a really cool character! I guess that there's some problems coming up between Lani and Jazz. hehe. Great update ^^ Can't wait to find out what happens next! Jazz seems so cool and out-going! : D

Oh my fuck! I knew it! I so knew it! When I read that there's this photographer I just knew it was her! Billie should dump Lanie for Jazz, not that Lanie isn't nice or something but Billie and Jazz, they just match you know? I love this story! You're an mazing writer :D

yay!
whoo!
go jazz!!

hm... I guess that Jasmine might crush Billie's plans : p Great update!!! : D

I love your story! keep on with the good stuff :P