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  • MissylinaRose-Sming

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    Still so in love with this story, cannot wait to see what happens now that shes reunited with her sister and im curious to see if matt caves and makes the bonnding mark with her. xxxxx
    June 30th, 2017 at 07:53am
  • mikeypeanuts

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    I love this story!
    June 28th, 2017 at 09:20am
  • Vintage Vengeance

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    So few of the hundreds of the stories i'm subscribed to rarely updates anymore so I was super excited to see an update! I still love this story and I do hope you continue with it! :D
    June 23rd, 2017 at 11:45pm
  • shortygirl

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    He knew she was under the bed. I'm happy to see an update.
    June 23rd, 2017 at 04:21am
  • Cityofghost

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    Yay!!! You updated I really missed this story. Hopefully you will continue to write, you totally left us hanging there! I'm finally happy that Avery started telling her sister about dhampirs. I really like the connection with her mom. Hopefully Ellie can forgive Matt, he sure does feel guilty. Hopefully we will learn which sister is more powerful. I'm betting on Ellie!
    June 23rd, 2017 at 12:59am
  • cheabea91

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    Ahh!! Yessss finally she knows and finally she gets to be back with her sister. It went better than I thought it would lol! I thought she would attempt runaway or something and end up getting caught in some danger.
    Also I like the like connection with her mom, is that real or did Avery do that? So is their mom not dead dead or something? Like a ghost or spirit?
    June 22nd, 2017 at 06:24am
  • wildwiththewind

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    I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!
    June 22nd, 2017 at 03:59am
  • cheabea91

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    i miss this story!!
    June 19th, 2017 at 09:15am
  • MissylinaRose-Sming

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    Omg pleaaaassseeeee continue this story Clap so excited to find out what happens next !!!
    February 19th, 2017 at 07:30am
  • EvilVillainMercy

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    I'm so glad I found this story !! It's so awesome !! Bravo ! Clap
    May 12th, 2016 at 12:34am
  • cheabea91

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    Yay for this update!!! Thanks! That escalated in a direction I wasn't expecting. I hope that everyone doesn't end up pissed at Matt because of this. I can see it all unfolding now. Please update soon, I've missed this story, all of your stories!!
    May 4th, 2016 at 05:31pm
  • lizicea7x

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    Ooooo i miss you and all your stories. Please more soon.
    Cant wait for her to find out that av is not dead. She has tu accept Matt.
    April 27th, 2016 at 12:17am
  • Killjoy Shadows

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    oh whow tthat was intence
    April 26th, 2016 at 11:21am
  • cheabea91

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    So excited about the update!! I can't wait to see what happens next, I hope revealing the truth doesn't go completely sideways! Love the way you write as well, not giving everything al at once and developing each scene and moment. Gives more personality to all the characters and to the plot.
    February 18th, 2016 at 08:09am
  • Killjoy Shadows

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    OMG love this, prefect bday prezzent thank you xx
    February 12th, 2016 at 05:42am
  • HanerJoy

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    Omg This had me on the edge!!!! I need to read more!!!! I cant wait to see her reaction when she gets the truth!!!!
    February 11th, 2016 at 06:53pm
  • HanerJoy

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    This gets more and more interesting!!!!! I cant wait to read more!!!!
    May 20th, 2015 at 12:46am
  • shortygirl

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    I can't wait for Avery to find out about her sister and that Matt is kinda dating her.
    May 19th, 2015 at 10:29pm
  • cheabea91

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    Yaaaay! Great update! ....and the plot thickens!!
    May 19th, 2015 at 06:41am
  • cheabea91

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    Miss this story!!
    May 7th, 2015 at 08:40pm