White Walls - Comments

I'm REALLY sorry for not commenting, I just couldn't put words together idk

If fillers mean happy moments so I'm totally up for fillers dude, it's a good change to read your stories and smile instead of crying hahaha (sorry)

Among all the things that amaze me, the most incredible is how John changed for good. When Lei said no to stay all day in the studio I thought he would start screaming and be all bitchy (maybe even saying "that's why i didn't marry you" or something bad like this), his actual reaction just showed his maturity.

Raising a child is difficult, but my dad said to me once "I may not be the best dad in the world, but I try to be the best me I can for you" and I think it's exactly this. Lei and John are being their best and doing a great job.

PS: LUCAS IS THE BEST CHARACTER I LOVE HIM VERY MUCH AND I HAVE TO EXPRESS MY EMOTIONS THROUGH CAPS LOCK (!!!!!!!!!!) ok, I'm fangirling over this kid, it's just... Imagine him, how cute! Stalk @lexbrinton on instagram and see her son... God, I love babies and toddlers. I will be the worst mother because if my kid says to me "sorry for being naughty" i will answer "you can eat all ice cream you want and buy a lot of toys just keep smiling". My heart melts easily. Ok, shut up myself.

Hi!
I love love love this story! It's wonderful

I'm so glad that you decided to make a sequel to DGUOM

"daddy gets angrier than mommy does" AWWW THATS SO CUTE (Sorry, just had to get that out there)
This was such a sweet chapter! It's nice to see Lucas getting along with his daddy for once, as well as heartwarming to see over-protective Lei.
I was hoping to see some of THAT form of Intimacy, given thats what you named the chapter, but I think I preferred this way better! Also, it really is good to know John is thinking FOR himself, and thinking of his family and not just himself.
I may be a horrible person for asking this, but is something bad going to happen to Lucas during the shoot? Because it would be interesting to read...NOTHING MAJOR THOUGH JUST LIKE HIM BEING GONE FOR LIKE TWO SECONDS AND SO LEIGHTON FREAKS OUT. That kind of thing haha
I cant wait to see where you take the story. Right now everything seems perfectly fine, but I know you better than that so Im just waiting for you to strike.

you are such a good writer wow! so talented!

So John was not 100% excited on having Lucas, but has he ever voiced that opinion? I mean, of course not everyone is 100% sure when they find out they're going to be parents. But John loves Lucas, so he's happy with him, right?

And about Jay, omg. Hope everything is good from here on out. Glad that Lei and John got to have some time to themselves. And that whole, 'everything changes' thing about marriage. I hope that doesn't change his mind or get to stressed over it.

And Lucas crying over John being ironic? Oh no.

But all in all, loved the chapter and can't wait to read more.

I'm so glad that this chapter was a happy one! You already told me that things are gonna fall apart so I have to prepare myself mentally for this! I loved the flashback and the way that John found out about the pregnancy, it was kinda cute (: John is afraid to marry Lei? noooo! be a man, dude! I kinda feel sorry for the way Lucas is treating John right now :\
I think would be nice some flashbacks about John talking about what happened with him, if he tried to take legal actions against his teacher or something like that.
Austin and Hilary? really? I thought they were meant to be :\
I like John's pov (:

@ xonyoursidex
Good question- that'll come up a little later!

First of all, sorry for not commenting on the last chapter!
Anyway, chapter 3 was a cute one, I love when Lei and John have their moment and I really liked the flashback!
Lucas can be such an pain in the ass when he wants, hahaha! Poor John, he needs to learn to relax or he'll end up crazy. He (John) needs to grow up and propose Lei already!

I want to ask you a stupid question... Why you named their son as Lucas and not John The VI? Haha, I'm just curious...

I giggled at the thought of a young 5 year old John getting his first kiss, then gasped about papa Jay. Oh and...
"how ironic that would eventually come to be…"
EXCUSE ME WHAT WHY IS LUKEY CRYING OVER HIM GOING TO BE IRONIC????
That flashback i just ahhh. I love that it shows how they found out about the pregnancy while at the same time showing John's recovery. More of these in his p.o.v. Please!

@ Biis
"I know this story will be really sad, I will cry and want to die."
I'm sorry guys I'll try make it as happy as I can but let me just say now you know me well so you know things are gonna fall apart...

Lucas is terrible! that's why I love him haha
John can be such a jerk sometimes, right? “What if I made you another O’Callaghan?” - why don't you just propose her again? you are driving Lei crazy!! ok, he's probaly afraid of something, but iiirgh sorry hahah
I am little scared of the followings chapters, actually the whole story, I know you will make me cry like a baby!
about the flashbacks, I think you could write something really cute like Lucas' firsts words, Lei being pregnant, John finding out about the pregnancy and the three of them as a familly when Lucas was born! and please, happy flashbacks, ok? I know this story will be really sad, I will cry and want to die, so could I just ask for happy flashbacks? (:

Loved this. Laughed when Lucas spit up on John's plate.
Eric and Jac? Love it. John keeps saying it;s up to Lei, but they should really talk about the whole marriage thing.
I hope John doesn't revert back to his ways and end up hurting Lucas like he hurt Leighton.

And flashbacks? Would love to see some. Maybe the day John came out of rehab? As well as Lucas being born. And maybe some cute moments of Leighton being pregnant.

I am a bad example to kids, because I laughed out loud when Lucas spat his food onto John’s plate.

My dad says that terrible two is life saying "you should have used a condom"

I'm happy for Eric and Jac (it's about time!), but shitty for what it developed between John and Lei. I still think he hasn't proposed because of some insecurity in his head, not because he forgot.

“What if I made you another O’Callaghan?”
WHAT IF YOU MADE HER AN O'CALLAGHAN?

“What, as small as mine?”
SHIIIIIIIIT. Leighton, your acid humour should stay only in your mind my dear.

Austin and Hil?! What?! The perfect couple?! Life makes love look hard :/

Mothers are mothers, there's no one like them, right? They were made to be soft on us.

Damn. Tell me it's not all happening again, is it? I can smell drama. Btw, making them parents now was a really good thing (I'm gonna regret my words) because it brings a sense of change to the story, it's not DGUOM 2, you know? It's not like the same things are happening some years later. It's a "different" story, both John and Lei know were they went wrong, changed and are going through new things in life (being parents as an example), but depression doesn't go away and it'll only get harder to find a new way to adapt and survive this. Did I make any sense? Anyway, what I mean is: you're doing a good job.

PS: I would like to see flashbacks about Lei revealing that she is pregnant, Lucas first word (or any first cute thing, i love happy flashbacks, sue me) and John's thoughts.

Omg, it broke my heart! John's an asshole with Lucas, I swear. I mean, okay, maybe that kid isn't kind and polite but he's just a kid. His kid. He should try to be his friend. He can't take his anger out on him.
And yes, flasback-pregnancy would be cute!
And yaaayyy for Jac and Halvo!
Keep writing! <3

My heart broke when little Lucas cried for his mama.
Cmon John, we're really gonna go back to this? He should be happy for his friend, not butthurt. Haha. And I felt a little disappointed about the whole "making you another o' Callaghan." That was a perfect opportunity for him to ask!
Leighton and I share the same fear of John taking his anger out on his son. I really dont want to see that happen for the sake of my feels.
I would love to see flashbacks of maybe when she gave birth to Lucas, or so,etime during her pregnancy! I think it'd be so cute.

@ lovelikedez
Most definitely.

Omg. Wow. Baby O'Callaghan! But the whole 'I thought we were going to be okay' thing! No! So excited for what's in store for them. I'm going to go through a roller coaster of emotions with this, aren't I?

''I thought we were going to be okay.'' - THIS IS KILLING ME!
I'm so afraid of reading this sequel because I know that will be sad. I will only read this because of Lucas! just kidding, but he is the cutest!! hahah “If he’s gonna look like daddy, he’s gotta talk like daddy.'' <3 I'm dying, that's all!

"I thought we were going to be okay" this made me really think if i should start reading this sequel or not! Haha
Anyway, i'm gonna read the first chapter now, but i need to say that i'm really afraid!