White Walls - Comments

SO HAPPY THAT LEI IS FINALLY OKAY BUT STILL SAD THAT IT'S QUITE IMPOSSIBLE FOR THEM TO GET BACK TOGETHER

I read this chapter like 5 times? Every time I read it.. I had no time to comment or I didn't know what to write...
And now... Well, first of all, finally. Finally, John. Don't you dare to give up on her. She doesn't deserve it.
You're breaking my heart but I do hope so that you will give them a happy ending (or at least, not an unhappy one!).
Update soon.

Dont let her die :(

NASAAN ANG SISTEMA PAKI AYOS PLEASE (read: WHYYY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME)

You are sooooo mean.

Aw I really want Lei to be okay :((( there's just so much heartbreak lately. But it's still so good. Please update soon!

Aww! John is so cute, but why the hell is she back in a coma?!?
This is not what I wanted to happen, she needs to be okay, for herself, Lukus and John.
Can't wait to read what happens next for them.

@ Jody!
Thank you so much! It's coming along slowly but surely!
X

This is breaking my heart, i was supposed to be getting ready for work, but saw that you had updated and i couldnt stop myself!
Why are you making me cry or tear up in ever chapter? Poor Eric and I really am hoping that John and everyone else can help Leighton get her memories back, especially about Lucas.
How could she not remember her baby, that's just cruel.
Impatiantly waiting for the next update. :)

That last sentence. Omg. I hope John can help Leighton get back her memories and help her realize he never gave up on her.

And omg Eric. I hope they find a way to have kids later on, whether it be adoption or some other way.

I'm kind of wondering how things will go when Lucas sees Leighton. Will the encounter spark recognition of some sort or it just be painful for John to see that she has no idea who Lucas is either.

Oh my god. I just finally had a chance to catch up and wept. Especially the last line of this chapter.

I'm sick right now so this comment is really short, but man, my heart. Keep up the emotional, yet awesome work.

That last line tore my heart apart.

""Mama said you hurt her because you gived up on her"

ooooh YOU! how could you?!? How do you write impact phrases like that?!
there's so much to be said about this chapter and how well written everything is, but FEELINGS.
You know how to make us always wanting more, congrats miss. If you ever doubted about this sequel being a good idea, know that DGUOM and WW are like Star Trek 1 and 2, both are so awesome, it's impossible to choose which one is better.

Uncle Halevo, aww!

"...if you break his god damn heart I’ll never forgive you!” I swear, John. Don't you dare.

Ohhh, can I have Lukey? He so so smart and so cute and this situation breaks my heart! Can't wait to read more. Please, update soon and please, make them happy. They deserve it.

Well there's my tear jerker for the day. Sigh. I don't know what to think about this. I obviously hope she gets her memory back, but I don't think the chances are very good. And God, poor Eric and Jac, that's devastating. I hope there is some happiness coming around in the next couple of chapters.
But, good chapter, like always. I really do love this story and I hope you update soon.

Ugh you make me cry too early in the morning! So worth the wait, I loved it so much. It's such a realistic portrayal of a tragic situation. I feel so bad for John, but I'm glad he got his check of reality from Eric. And poor little Lucas ugh. I have a glimmer of hope that things will somehow right themselves even if it's just John making up/apologizing for everything.
I can't wait to see what happens next and see either John trying to do right and be a father or progress with Lei. Can't wait!
Oh, also in response to your comment....you've already read some of my work, haha. You just haven't realized x :)
-J

THAT HAS GOT TO BE THE MOST HEARTBREAKING LINE COMING FROM A THREE YEAR OLD :((((((

@ megustajawno
THANKYOU so much you don't know how much that means! I'm so relieved you think I've improved, I really appreciate that kind of criticism, it makes me feel like I'm doing a good job :) I hope you like the next chapter, hopefully it'll be up soon!
I'd also really love to read your story because I think it's so interesting to read about and how others portray it, plus there's not many written so it'd be cool to see your take on the subject :)
X thanks so much for the support!

I was just rereading all of this and going back over everything it's crazy to think DGUOM came out in april of last year. I remember first reading it when it was just a one shot and being in love with it and it's come so far and you've only gotten better and you're just such an incredible writer.
I've written/write john with a mental illness but you just do it so well and just yeah. Random but I'm on edge waiting for the next part and I got to thinking, even though I'm spotty in comments I always come back because it's just so good<3

@ mmmxalright
Soon!