You Never Know - Comments

Great job

Woohoo!!! She deserves someone she can trust and shows some maturity:) Go Sid!!

@Thatmom I'm glad your enjoying it!

I love where this seems to be headed.

I know! I'm sorry, it broke my heart to write these last two chapters. This story seems to have a mind of its own at this point. Has anyone else experienced that while writing? Maybe it's just me.

Oh crap. I was really hoping for him to turn out to be a decent guy in a relationship.

@Thamom Amen, I believe people can change but I think thats more from relationship to relationship. If they cheat on the same person once and they stay obviously they don't feel comfortable with either who they are in the relationship with or themselves enough to be fully committed.They need to be kicked to the curb fast.

She needs to kick Max to the curb. No shouting. No crying. Just get the hell out!!!

thanks Mitcheae!

I love the nickname

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Thank you Thatmom! I have been on hiatus since may thanks to a writers block but now I'm back and will try to update weekly!

Why am I just finding this? It's really good:)

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Great couple of chapters

Thanks for the feed back that's a really good point. I'll fix the dialogue as soon as I can. Thanks again!

I love were this is going and I think it is very entertaining. The only problem I saw with it was the formatting for your dialogue. Instead of having everything in a big paragraph, space it out. like:
"Ah, you must be Nicole. I'm Dan it's nice to finally meet you."
"Thank you Sir, I'm happy to be here."
Keep up the good work because I love this! :)

great chapter

Thank you MITCHEAE! :)