Beautiful Liar - Comments

So so happy to see this update:)

Loved it!!!

Oh my goodness I kinda hope adam kicks the crap out of alex!! such a hot ending I really need more of this story in my life please don't keep us waiting so long for the next chapter<33333

She needs to tell him though

That was a hot hot homecoming!!!!

Well that was a surprising ending ;)

I like C and A together, it would definitely be interesting

A with a mixture of C but don't hurt Robby too bad!!!:)

I like Adam wins the cup, flies to see Olivia and Robby gets better. Alex can make whatever move he wants but can't break the bond of Adam and Olivia:)

I like a combination of A and C. Alex makes his move, turns out to be a psycho, Robby gets worse, Adam finds out and ditches his cup run to be with Olivia, haha. A little drama never hurt anyone ;D

So great! Can't wait for the next chapter with her and alex in germany!

Yep!! Happy camper right here:)

that was super cute, and i can't wait to see what happens in germany.

Woohoo!! So happy to see this updated:)

Ahhh I thought it was a lie when my notifications said this had updated, but it wasn't!!!! Hoooolllllyyyy cap I thought it was finally going to happen but instead you make her brother get hurt?!? You are killing me!!! I'm thinking Olivia needs some sex to make her feel better how about you? ;) I mean really ae they celibate or something??? Let's see some real action none of this teasing stuff

Congratulations on the wedding where are you going for your honeymoon?? Relax and don't get too stressed ejoy your special day, and if you do happen to have more sleepless nights give us another update! I know I am selfish :P

~stay beautiful

Congratulations on your wedding! Have a wonderful time. I hope Olivia doesn't focus on her comments about Adam's ice time. Let it go Olivia. I also agree Adam and Olivia need to get busy. :)

Have a beautiful wedding and honeymoon:) We will be here when you get back:)

Hey it's me!! I finally am commenting instead of just messaging you lol be proud!!
Just ugh! Adam and Olivia need to get busy in the next chapter just saying, oh and use the gif I sent you!!!

Love them they're cute and sweet and Olivia is so relatable I feel like she is so real. You know I love you Sar so keep up the writing and update like now!!!!!!

@ c.juds
Good point!! You are definitely right, I'm taking that part into the next chapter. Thanks for the feedback

I think she was a little too harsh with her rant. She called out things that had they actually been said to a player would have been a huge no. Most players want more playing time and her throwing it in his face was not nice, at all. otherwise good update.