Beautiful Liar - Comments

Thank you thank you thank you for not drawing out the drama. This was just perfect!!!

I hope Adam realizes how much Olivia likes him and not Alex. I also hope he knows the world does not revolve around hockey. I have a hard.time remembering that sometimes. Love the update and the gif!

Adam needs to take a step back from his rich boy point of view. Olivia has to work hard to get where she wants to go. She can't afford to tell her boss no, even if he is an ass!!

Loved seeing Adam being a big ball of mush!! So cute:)

If Adam is this sweet asking Olivia to be his girlfriend, his marriage proposal will be out of this world. Love the update!!

Aww so cute!

@ Patrick Sharp
@ jasper_girl
@ Thatmom
You all are so sweet as always thanks for commenting!

Wow. I love this story. Please update soon.

So adorable for him to bring her lunch !!! Loved that they were both a bit jealous:)

Fuck Adam is so cute. I really liked this chapter and I hope they have more cute moments to come! I can't wait for the next update!

Adam is so cute playing off like he knew Olivia went off to class.

Dougie is a great character in the story. I like how he interacts with Adam and Olivia. He makes the mood a little lighter for both of them.

I am very happy to see Olivia and Adam are starting over.

Do I like the Adam gifs? YES!! More, pretty please!!!! :)

Holding my breath through the whole chapter. Whew! Loved it:)

I love the awkward cuteness between them right now:)

@ patti1022

I know me too, which is an aspect of this story I really like. It's unlike anything I've written which is fun

And yes I do have a Bergeron story, two actually, but let me just warn you now it was my first story on here so it was a big learning process! Looking back it's not the best writing but it's really lovey dovey for the most part

Adam did such a sweet thing!!!

I like longer chapter but shorter chapters are cool too.
I thought it was incredibly sweet Adam got Olivia's brother home for a visit. Any time a service person comes home and surprises loved ones, I am in tears. Hope Olivia gives Adam another shot.
I didn't know you had a Bergeron story too. I might have to check it out. Your stories are going to make me a Bruins fan and we can't have that. :)

@ Thatmom
Okay thanks :)

I like the longer chapters but do what serves your purposes better:)

@ Thatmom and anyone else
I wanted to ask you a question since I know you read my other story as well, Do you prefer the shorter updates on this story where I can update regularly or do you like the longer chapters on the Bergeron story where I only update once every week or so? I want to know so I can write better updates :)

@ Patrick Sharp
You are soooo on the money, Just you wait and see!!! I'm so glad you said that, because I was trying to drop subtle hints here and there (again very subtle), but I wasn't sure if anyone would pick up on anything just yet between Adam and Kelley. So way to go! Olivia on the other hand, is ready to punch her out haha (Not so subtle)

@ patti1022
I'm so glad you still like this even though it's not your team, Thanks for commenting!