September 15th, 2014 at 03:17am
Sordid - Comments
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So glad to see there was an update on this story and it was so worth the wait. Wonder what Michael is up to with the 'go get my wallet' scene.....September 14th, 2014 at 08:36pm
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That was really strange. Why would he ask her to get his wallet and he knows he has his card? Something's going on there. So happy you finally updated.September 14th, 2014 at 05:49pm
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That was fishy, why would he try to get her away from the site (well at least that's what it seems like). Hmmmm
SO happy you updated by the way! Been waiting for a while and I'm happy you came back to it. :) Can't wait for moreSeptember 14th, 2014 at 04:40pm -
I love this story! It's one if my favorites to read here on Mibba! You have no idea how happy I am that you updated!September 14th, 2014 at 04:27pm
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Please update its so goodSeptember 13th, 2014 at 11:28pm
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Please update :) xxJune 26th, 2014 at 04:50am
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WRITE MORE SOON PLEASEJune 20th, 2014 at 07:54pm
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I really like this story :) can't wait to read moreJune 18th, 2014 at 10:37pm
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Just found this story and I love it, can't wait for more!June 9th, 2014 at 06:07pm
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Haha love the author's note. I like that we got to see a little but of how he's feelingMay 28th, 2014 at 07:41pm
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I love the chemistry going on with each other!May 28th, 2014 at 12:28pm
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Yay thanks for updating! I can't wait to see how this progresses. I just hope it's not in the same way as Fish Tank. Hahah.May 27th, 2014 at 07:06am
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Just read this whole thing after I saw the update on the stories page. I'm totally in love with this! Things are progressing and heating up and I can't wait to see what you have in store for the plot. What is his end game I still don't know but I'm dying to find out :)May 25th, 2014 at 06:55am
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I'm in love with this story. I know I've said this but since you updated twice recently I do want to say it again because I'm trying to be a better reader for the writers on the site because positive reinforcement only helps and never harms. I really can't wait for me. I'm so excited to see what's going to happen between Michael and her.May 25th, 2014 at 06:43am
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So happy you're back! Don't stop!!May 24th, 2014 at 09:37pm
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Thank God you updated! Just watched X Men as well, he does looks to die for!!May 24th, 2014 at 07:58pm
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Ah! I love this!! Please update soon!May 24th, 2014 at 06:00am
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IM SCREAMING PLEASE KEEP UPDATINGApril 22nd, 2014 at 11:09pm
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yep. i'm definitely still addicted to this story and things are definitely hotting up ;) could you update sooner? the tension is melting my soul.April 22nd, 2014 at 08:33pm
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Ugh, thank you guys so much. I write in this every once in a while and update it even less, but your feedback always inspires me to get back to it, so seriously, thank you all. c: And yeah, it's all a little fishy, isn't it? Michael's been a little sketchy from the beginning, though, right?