Yessssss. Dude totally fucking stoked to see where this is going. This is my favorite subscription by far. I loooove the sass. I love everything, can't wait for the next chaper
I really want to leave you with this amazingly in depth and thoughtful comment about your story (which I love) but I'm so tired, and I just happened across this before I was going to bed and I stuck around to read it all and oh my god, it is so amazing. Between the choice of some much needed sleep and this, this won. I was so annoyed when I hit the last chapter, I want more! I love it; I love the characters, and the plot. I can't wait to see what happens next. Michael is just UHMSSMDGF. UMF. He is beautiful. Please explain to me how I am physically attracted to your fictional character. I'm totally excited for Harper and him to happen.
Perfection. The wait is always worth it, it seems with this story. I really love that Harper is beginning to feel this desire bubble up inside of her. Michael is too fucking beautiful for it not to happen. That fantasy was awesome. Who wouldn't want to straddle that man? I love the fact that he trusts her with his house, but does that have a double meaning or not? I'm feeling a double meaning here, but I guess we will see. Cannot wait for your next update, love.
Holy fuck! That was sort of hot and you can definitely tell why she would get turned on by that. I wish it would have been longer, but only because it was so good. Cannot wait for your next update, love. Seriously, it's beautiful. :)
This story is actually quite well written. I love the whole vibe of the story. Harper seems like a character that has tons of potential, no matter the circumstances. What is Michael's angle though? Does he want Harper, or does he want to help her? I don't get it, but he is gorgeous. Lovely description, fantastic imagery, and entirely believable characters. Update soon, darling. I really love this one.
You updated another great chapter!!!!! And not to mention, it's a chapter DEDICATED TO MOI :D I am so honored!! Pleaasseee, keep writing, I love it so so much
This is really interesting! Harper is a very compelling character and she's a wonderfully developed protagonist, and her relationship with her family and Michael is fleshed-out. I can't wait to see what happens with her and Michael, but judging from her past, it likely won't be smooth sailing. :,) Great job, and I can't wait to read more!
I utterly adore this! You're writing (although a completely different genre and era) reminds me of Tolkien. The way you tell the story itself is simply mesmerising!