I'm Just Fine - Comments

found this one 3 days ago and i really liked it :) thx for sharing this story with us!

oh god I have no clue what show...but congrats on graduating!!!

Thank you. I'm trying hard to make each character their own which can be difficult at times. I'll do my best to update as regularly as I can, but right now I've been swamped with exams and rehearsals. But I'm trying! Haha. I'm glad the errors aren't too bad, I proofread myself and I'm not great at it. Thanks for the comment.
PS I'll darken the writing for you.

The words on your layout are a little light and its sort of hard to see (or maybe its just me) but I thought I'd let you know :)
I like how Flynn's friends are each have different personalities that make them seem almost like real people instead of imaginary. The dialogue for the boys is really believable too, they don't speak with perfect grammar or anything like that, they speak how normal boys would speak in real life. I noticed a few errors here and there, but nothing really glaring. His new friends seem really cool, despite their problems too.

All in all this was a really great story and I hope you update it soon!