From Under the Cork Tree - Comments

I'm very sorry that you went through that with your father. I can't think of anything worse.

It was a great chapter. Brilliant, really.

I feel so bad for Angelus. I don't know what I'd do in that situation. I'm glad you had Perry shout at her--she needed it.

@ chynnablueink
Thank you, it doesn't hurt so much anymore, but I get those days where I miss him and I cry, and try to convince myself he's on vacation. But I know he's in a better plan and he's not hurting anymore

Great job writing that. It was intense, and moving, and for a person who hasn't experienced the death of anyone close to them it have me a real idea of what that might feel like. Like it was a joke. Like you were stuck in a record playing on a loop. You conveyed the feeling of disbelief perfectly, because I imagine that's how it would feel--not being able to truly comprehend that a person is gone. And I just want to say I'm so sorry about your Dad. I can't even imagine what that must be like.

Oh gosh, that was so heartbreaking. You depicted it so perfectly, the mindlessness of it all going right through you like some kind of bad joke that you don't want to believe. You did a good job of conveying everyone's separate reactions. I feel so bad for Patrick for being the one to break the news.

That was mindblowing, and so tragic at the same time, snd i can only imagine how amazing the next chapter will be. Please take your time on it, I know it will be fantastic though sad.

I love the line you used in the AN "bad acting with real pain" because thats perfect. Please copyright that and use it in a real book i know youll write someday.

Before i read, update yay :D

This is really heavy stuff and you're writing it so well. I hope you manage okay with the next chapter in particular

@ carry.me.home.
Me and you are on the same page, I'm sorry about your father passing, I know when my dad died I was a wreck, and a lot of things were surreal and sometimes I feel like I'm dreaming and I'll wake up one day and it'll be just a terrible nightmare

Oh my god.

I was in tears by the end. And her reaction was basically the same as mine when my dad passed away on New Year's Eve. I didn't think it was real. And then they let us see his body. It was horrible. And sometimes I still don't think it's real...

Take your time love! I love this story.

Im laughin about patrick asking to dog sit, thats perfect.

Oh god, okay, whatever it is, I hope the baby ends up alright

oh man i remember a while ago when you sent me this bit and a little bit of the next. that last phone call is a killer

The suspense is killing me!

bracing myself for it. Need to brace myself for it lol

Oh nooooo here it comes

I finished

Oh God

I love it

It's like crack for my eyes

Write more plz

I'm only on Chapter Five and I love this already.

I also hate you a little bit for being better at this than I am

I kinda wanna give up and just spend my time reading your stuff instead. ;))

HOW DO YOU DO THIS SO WELL? TELL ME YOUR SECRETS

Love the way Pete tortures Patrick

Ahhhhhh what is this surprise thingy omg hurry pleaseeee