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  • fiction246

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    I'm in love with the way you are writing all of this family stuff!!! It is just so beautiful and so real!!! I love the fact that they have a girl!! You totally got me excited I thought Michelle was going to be in labour!!! Can't wait for the next one :)
    May 4th, 2014 at 02:16pm
  • Synzeeslash8

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    Well... I was so okay with this story. I loved it, the beggining, maybe the prequel even more. They were so perfect for each other, I was so excited to se every other update. But this... really, starting a chapter with "does her poor look wierd to you" it's kinda too much. It's all about babies, and not in the good way that You are my life now has been. I get it, they were guys, this is a pregnant woman, but still. Too much, too weird. I still love your style, your writing though, so I'm pretty excited for your other stories.
    May 4th, 2014 at 12:18pm
  • headrushxreeta

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    This was so sweet and endearing and adorable. Loved this! Very excited for the next update
    May 4th, 2014 at 11:50am
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    Loved this...
    Gah Matt and McKenna and Baby Emry are just adorable together. I love them.
    I can not wait for Baby Haner... c'mon already!!!!
    I'm tired now so...
    xoxo Jessi
    May 4th, 2014 at 07:59am
  • SillyFrench

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    Could Matt be anymore perfect?
    Looking forward to read more, and read about baby Haner =)
    Keep up the good work!
    May 3rd, 2014 at 12:08pm
  • heretic.

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    God, Matt is the bomb, right? He's just so attentive and patient with her, and rapidly becoming wrapped firmly around Emry's finger! I love the name, by the way, it's gorgeous!

    I loved how he was in the shower, she was fretting and panicking and trying to hide herself away, but he just knocked down all those fears in one swoop! He's a god send!

    I'm so excited for baby Haner to arrive! :D
    May 1st, 2014 at 08:13pm
  • headrushxreeta

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    Awww i so loved this chapter! It was so sweet and lovey! I'll definitely be sad see this go but I've definitely enjoyed these stories!
    May 1st, 2014 at 04:44pm
  • AJ9

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    I'm gonna miss this so much when it ends but I can't wait till you update again. Xxx Mr. Green
    May 1st, 2014 at 12:57am
  • akmo4725

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    I can't believe it's almost over! I love this story so much!!! Ready for avenged baby number three to pop up!!
    April 30th, 2014 at 10:12pm
  • amanduh

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    Your writing makes it all so believable, awesome! And now after Emry's birth, I'm excited for Brian and Michelle's baby to arrive!
    April 30th, 2014 at 10:07pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Awwwh they didn't want to be apart from each other and I totally understand that and I can't wait to read more!! I really can't!! This story is one of my favorites! :)!
    April 30th, 2014 at 09:51pm
  • SarcasticNightmare

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    Aww Matt's adorable. I feel bad that Brian's freaking out a bit. I can't wait to read more! And I'm curious to see how Brian handles the whole thing.
    April 30th, 2014 at 07:00pm
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    I loved this. It was so beautiful and Matt's so a sweet heart in it. I am looking forward to reading more. So more soon? Please
    April 30th, 2014 at 02:39pm
  • fiction246

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    Loving this!!! I hate that it is going to be over soon!!! I hope you have more stories in the works because I can't get enough of your writing :) really sweet chapter :) I love how their relationship just keeps growing stronger!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    April 30th, 2014 at 11:51am
  • Synful Cocktail

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    Goddamn, Matt is fucking going above and beyond, holy shit. He's so understanding, and it's so cute to see that he practically knows Mac like the back of his hand. Oh gosh. I'm crying, I'm literally tearing up over how sweet he is with her.

    Now, I know for sure that Brian will break down when Michelle's giving birth. I expect him to actually pass out, to be completely honest.

    I really love this story so much! Flipping hell. It's so damn perfect and I really don't want it to end just yet! Oh, didn't you say that you're working on other story? Apparently another Bratt? Please excuse me while I go pass out.
    April 30th, 2014 at 10:56am
  • Synful_Shadows

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    Yay! Baby Sanders is here!!!!

    Now all we need is Baby Haner!!! That's one I'm waiting to read about & how Brian handles Michelle being in labor

    Update soon xx
    April 27th, 2014 at 07:15pm
  • akmo4725

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    This chapter was AMAZING!!!! Baby girl is finally here!! I love the name!!! It's freaking perfect!!! Mac and Matt are so adorable together!!! I love how Michelle was asking questions about everything! Brian is so emotional I honestly hope you write Chelles birth in as well! I wanna see Brian break down!!! Little sanders family!!! I absolutely can not wait for the next chapter!!
    April 26th, 2014 at 10:56pm
  • shadzgalfoREVer

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    This story is just as amazing..if not more ..than the first! I love love LOVE it :)
    April 26th, 2014 at 09:19pm
  • SarcasticNightmare

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    Awww maybe she was indeed upset that they had been calling her a him...Who knows. Anyways I love the name and the realism that came with the way you wrote the process. Brian's adorable and I loved his response of 'Fuck both of you.' I'm curious to see how everyone reacts when Michelle's water breaks and she has to go through the same process.
    April 26th, 2014 at 05:42pm
  • Hannahdoll

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    I knew it! I had such a feeling that it was a girl and I love that name and I love that she has James as her middle name <3
    April 26th, 2014 at 05:06pm