And Then There Was Us - Comments

  • Oh what a bittersweet moment. Bitter definitely because of this being the last chapter but sweet for the joy of everything. And i definitely let a few tears slip, this was so beautiful! :)))
    May 18th, 2014 at 06:20pm
  • Jesus, I can't even see the screen, I'm crying so damn much! You do it to me every time, haha.

    Baby Haner is here!!! Finally!! And her name is absolutely perfect! God, I could just imagine Brian crying and holding his little girl. But what had me blubbing, was that beautiful moment between Michelle and McKenna. They've bonded so much throughout the story, they are sisters. Sigh. Perfect

    Can't wait for the epilogue! :D
    May 18th, 2014 at 05:11pm
  • God that was amazing. I cried. This is such a beautiful story and I'm so sad that it's over.
    May 18th, 2014 at 04:24pm
  • Absolutely beautiful!!! Little miss Haner has arrived!!! What a beautiful chapter!! I can't believe this is almost over!!! Only one left!!! Truly can't wait for your Bratt!!! I love it. I'm super excited :)
    May 18th, 2014 at 02:10pm
  • Well fuck I've been reduced to tears this morning. This was the perfect ending to this story. The long awaited birth for miss Scarlett Elizabeth Haner was well worth it. The nervousness Chelle had and the way Mac calmed her as well as Brian was amazing!! Brians emotions were perfect! I can just picture the tears and relief holding his baby girl! Matt is just so perfect for Mac!! I truly loved this story, just like all your others!! Can't wait for the epilogue!
    May 18th, 2014 at 02:08pm
  • Oh my fucking god, I cried throughout this whole damn chapter. Just, holy shit. Poor Michelle, she's so worried that she won't have her baby, god, my heartstrings are really tugging for her.

    Aw, Michelle, you need Brian there next to you! Honey.. God, be still my beating heart. I'm so happy that the birth went smoothly! God, Brian and Michelle deserve their princess after all this time. Scarlett Elizabeth is such an adorable name, holy hell and so fitting!

    Jesus, that image of Brian crying had me crying as well.. aldfjasldf;a. I can't wait to read the epilogue! I've loved this story so damn much!

    Happy couples make me happy! Cute
    May 18th, 2014 at 09:11am
  • everyone has insecurities and I love how everyone is really good with Emry and I know that Matt will make her feel better and I fee sad that it's going to be ending soon and I just love how they have got together and everything else!! :)!
    May 16th, 2014 at 09:02pm
  • Jesus, this whole chapter I was swallowing around a huge lump in my throat. First of all, how Matt is so amazing with Mac and the baby, reassuring her, being there for her when she needs him. I adore this guy!

    Then Michelle, god love her, I bet she's a wreck just waiting for the baby to come! The guys' admission that they wanted their wives more because of the babies was so sweet.

    Now the tears are really flowing now! That last part was probably, my favourite part of this whole story. God, they just love each other so much! I completely understand their need for one another. They just created a beautiful life together, it's natural.

    I'm sad that there's only two chapter left though D: But it's been an amazing story!
    May 12th, 2014 at 09:48pm
  • This was soooooooo effing sweet. I love their relationship so much. I'm gonna be sad to see this end but i know I'll go back and re-read these over and over :)
    May 11th, 2014 at 04:42pm
  • I absolutely loved this. It was just so emotional. You actually made me cry. Like proper tears! Cry.

    Looking forward to the next part. Please update soon xx
    May 11th, 2014 at 01:06pm
  • First of all, congratulations on the birth of your niece!!! How special and wonderful. Glad everything is okay now for baby and mother.

    Now the chapter, I loved it :) I loved the moment with Kim and McKenna!! It was really beautiful!! And I adore how much more Matt loves McKenna now!! I can't wait for the Haner baby to come!!! I will be sorry to see this story finish but I can't wait for what you are going to be bringing out next!!! I love your Bratt stories!!!
    May 11th, 2014 at 10:10am
  • Wow....just wow. I felt so bad for Michelle and how scared she is getting closer to her due date. I'm so glad she has Mac in this story to help soothe her fears. I love that she goes to Mac instead of val. The amount of love Matt has for Mac and emry is just beautiful. It brings tears to my eyes....I have a feeling Brian will be the same way with chelle, especially after everything they have been through. I'm so sad this story is already ending, but it makese excited to see WHATS next from you! This was an amazing filler chapter, and I can't wait to see the birth of baby haner! Maybe johnny will finally become a dad in the epilogue lol!!!
    May 11th, 2014 at 07:28am
  • I'm crying, this was the most beautiful chapter I've read. Just, holy shit. The love that Matt and Mac have for each other is overwhelming, it's unadulterated, sincere and it's just so pure. Never would I have paired the two together, but you've made it so flawless, as if they were an actual couple. You've kept their traits so realistic and just holy fuck. I love how Matt's feeling, how he feels about his emotions about Mac. It's cute.

    I CANT WAIT UNTIL MICHELLE HAS HER BABY! BRIAN AND HER HAVE BEEN WAITING SO LONG FOR ONE AND HOLY HELL. I BET IT'S A BOY. Cute Swoon

    I don't want this to end. Cry
    May 11th, 2014 at 06:06am
  • Aww it was cute. It's nice to see their love is so deep, Mrs. Sanders words were so sweet. And I absolutely love the way Michelle is so connected with McKenna. It was really good for being a filler. Awesome chapter and can't wait for more.
    May 11th, 2014 at 04:47am
  • I love how they make having a conversation about their daughter's poop, sound so normal. Hahaha. I have to disagree with one of the comments below me, talking about a baby's poop is actually quite normal for parents, so I don't think it's weird at all. But that's just me.

    The part where Matt told Mac to get in the chair, reminded me of an advert that gets shown over here, where two M and M's are fighting over who sits in the bowl. "You get in the bowl." "No, you get in the damn bowl" lmfao sorry, I'm rambling.

    Mac, bless her, poor thing. Of course she's going to feel apprehensive and nervous, she's just had her first baby. Unfortunately, they don't come with user manuals, haha. But I get that everyone watching and hovering over her would be a pain in the ass. They only mean well, though.

    “You can’t break her, I asked. Hahahaha!

    Matt groaned. “Jesus, that kid has taken away the best things in life.” Such a guy. XD Your wife just pushed a baby out of her vajayjay, Matt!

    Oh, and then he goes and says something like that, and makes me swoon all over the damn place! Awwwww, the reaction to the nursery was absolutely perfect and so emotional! He really is the perfect guy! I need to clone him! XD

    I mean, getting up with Mac at every feed and massaging her ankles, god he's the epitome of perfection! I really need to get me one of these! Haha

    “Lucky he’s not here, or his tiny feelings would get hurt.” I see he still has his sense of humour! XD Poor Johnny.

    They're gonna make awesome parents!

    I know exactly how Michelle feels, it's the worst! When you've lost one, you're always on edge, anxious, wondering if it's going to happen again. But Brian's right, their daughter is a fighter. To have gotten as far as she has, they'll be okay. She is a Haner after all.

    “Whatever you want, Shell. If you want me to stand on my head I will. Oh my god, Brian is just precious. Hahaha.

    I'm crossing my fingers and toes that everything will go smoothly for Team Haner!
    May 9th, 2014 at 12:45am
  • Reading this chapter makes it look so natural for the both of them to be parents. It's amazing.
    Looking forward to see baby Haner coming into this world.
    Loved the chapter! =)
    May 7th, 2014 at 11:00pm
  • Matt and Mac make the best parents!!! Poor Mac having her breakdown...sometimes it's hard after birth, but I think she is getting the hang of it! Matt wanting to be there for all of it is sweet!! Poor Michelle....I hate that she still has that fear. I love Brian trying to be there for her and make it go away....I'm really anxious of their baby's birth! Please let everything go smoothly with Brian and Michelle and baby haner! They needs this to complete their family!!! Please update soon!!! Oh and macs reaction to emrys room was beautiful!!!!
    May 5th, 2014 at 05:55am
  • Awww so cute. I can't blame McKenna, holding babies makes me nervous because of how tiny they are too. And I feel like McKenna's gonna end up being the strong one for Michelle, lol. Awesome chapter can't wait for more.
    May 4th, 2014 at 07:42pm
  • This is such a lovely chapter and a fantastic story. I can't wait for more. Please update soon xx Mr. Green
    May 4th, 2014 at 05:33pm
  • I'm in love with Emry and I can't wait to see what is going to happen with Michelle and Brian!! I know they deserve the happiness of a child and I can't wait to read more of this!! :)!
    May 4th, 2014 at 05:20pm