The Elite - Comments

I have given up on finding vampire stories since everyone started making them sparkle. The beginning of this story is so sophisticated and has an amazing prologue! It's so informative of the setting/time and how society has gotten to this point but it's no overwhelming with information for example, stating that Rehkov has a cell phone helped me understand that it's a modern story instead of a futuristic or in a historical piece.

I find stories like this and the Divergent series, for example that are so complex and heavy with a Big Brother subgroup, could be confusing but the way you write this, your word choice and how you presented the information of Vampires and Humans, their relationship with each other and Half-Vampires' roles on the world helps the reader understand right away why/how this became a dystopia.

I find it so funny that it's a problem for Rehkov that the Protector in the woods was hot.

aww that was cute. even though I know there's a sequel, I was still tearing up a little at the end. I hope its up real soon, I can't get enough of those two.

I finally finished reading :D I love it. I'm so excited for the sequel.

I just found this story and I couldn't even wait to finish reading before I had to comment. oh my god this is seriously amazing. I really really really hope you get this published. I will definitely buy it. this is so well written and planned and it's always quite difficult to find stories with such a well fleshed out background story but my god I am in love!!!

I'll probably comment again when I finish reading and when you update. I'm really sleepy right now and I've got a few exams but gahh I'm gonna be so distracted by rygaard and rehkov!! I adore them.

I just found this story and I couldn't even wait to finish reading before I had to comment. oh my god this is seriously amazing. I really really really hope you get this published. I will definitely buy it. this is so well written and planned and it's always quite difficult to find stories with such a well fleshed out background story but my god I am in love!!!

I'll probably comment again when I finish reading and when you update. I'm really sleepy right now and I've got a few exams but gahh I'm gonna be so distracted by rygaard and rehkov!! I adore them.

Lovely. Update.

dawww, I never get tired of this story.. Update??

They're the cutest thing ever when they get along and even when they don't get along. I ship them so hard!

Pllllllllllease update???? I need more Rygaard and Rehkov!!

I can't tell you how much I love those two together. I seriously ship them, so fucking much.

You're pulling at my heartstrings here!! Don't do this to me!!

Please update again soon! I think I'm flatlining here =)

Please update again soon! I think I'm flatlining here =)

Ahhhh what next?!?!?! Love it so much and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT?!?!? HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME?! What an ending to a chapter, hot damn diggity! I can't wait for the next update!

update????? Pwease.... I wanna read more haha

I can't-How do I- What do I- I don't know what to do? I can't function off of that. I can't go on! Please, update soon! I may disappear without another update and then what will I do?

Even though I've read it before, I still look forwarx to every edited update ^.^

More, more, more! Haha I loved the original and I love this even more :). Please update soon? It would be greatly appreciated?? :D

More, more, more! Haha I loved the original and I love this even more :). Please update soon? It would be greatly appreciated?? :D