Wounded Warrior No More - Comments

I loved this! Great job!

Wow powerful story, totally just drawned me in so much. Great writing keep up the good work:)

Wow powerful story, totally just drawned me in so much. Great writing keep up the good work:)

@RazzyVengeance6661
Thanks. I tried for hours to get it right

I love the new layout honey!

@Marissa.Motionless
Thank you so very much. I can't tell you how much it means to me that you would say something like that and I wonder myself at times why people haven't commented on this. Thank you again for recommending this story as well as American Soldier.

I don't understand how this has no comments. It's very relatable, realistic and well written. You don't over complicate things like some people do, but I can tell you work very hard to word things correctly in a way everyone can understand. This is very well thought out and planned, and appeals to a more mature audience. Naturally they are more difficult to please, trust me I know I got comments that my chapters were disappointing my readers. ( I was 15 they were like 23) But you seem to have mature writing down very well :) My only advice is maybe some comic relief, this story is too serious for my personal taste then again I'm a teenager xD You are headed in a good direction and really know what you're writing about. I recommended this, as well as the first part :)