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Hope you update soon they story is so cute and Kiyomi is sweet, the three of them are adorable together

I SWEAR TO GOD JORDY, YOU'D BETTER INCLUDE WHAT GOES DOWN AT THE FESTIVAL BECAUSE THIS CHAPTER GOT MY HOPES UP FOR SOMETHING GOOD TO HAPPEN. AND I LOVED, BUT HATED HOW MORI NEVER GOT HIS CHANCE TO ASK HER OUT. LIKE, BEECHES, HE'S TRYING TO USE HIS SUAVE MOVES ON HIS WOMAN, GTFO AND LET THEM DO THEIR THING.

AND OH MY GOD JORDY, YOU MAKE IT HARD TO LAUGH AND IT HURTS TO BE HAPPY BECAUSE WHEN I READ ABOUT THE THREE OF THEM BEING THEIR OWN LITTLE FAMILY I JUST DIED AND MELTED ON THE INSIDE AND GOT SUCH WARM FUZZIES AND I SAW THE THREE OF THEM WALKING OFF HAND IN HAND SMILING AT EACH OTHER WITH A PEACH AND WHITE PRETTY BACKGROUND AND SPARKLES GOING OFF AROUND THEM AND JUST TALKING ABOUT WHAT I SAW IS MAKING ME FEEL THE LOVE. Oh, but it hurts because I just put my nose piercing back in and it had been out for a while so I had to repuncture part of it and IT HURTS TO SMILE.

AH!! The end of the chapter just literally made me squeal so loud!! URGH!! SO CUTE!! HONEY AND MORI AND KIYOMI!! A CUTE LITTLE FAMILY OF THEIR OWN!!

JORDY, IT'S HAPPENING. FINALLY. I'M COMMENTING.

The thought of Mori blushing while being a pervert and thinking of Kiyomi in a bathing suit.



OH HONEY'S SUCH A LITTLE SHIT FOR TEASING HIM, BUT I LOVE HIM FOR IT. LIKE OMFG, YOU KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DOING HONEY. MILK IT FOR ALL IT'S WORTH. YOU GO LITTLE LOLITA BOIIII!


could not resist the sass

BUT THEN MORI WAS LIKE A PERVERT OUT IN THE OPEN AND JUST STARED AND OMFG LIKE THIS WAS WHAT WAS GOING THROUGH MY HEAD AND I WAS GIGGLING AND JUST SNORTING AND FREAKING OUT ON THE INSIDE



AND THEN WHEN HE WAS HELPING HER OUT WHEN THEY WERE IN THE WATER I JUST FUCKING DIED AND SWOONED AND FAINTED AND BLED AND MADE WEIRD NOISES THAT MAKE YOU QUESTION IF THEY NEED HELP OR EVEN MENTAL HELP AND JUST LIKE HOLY CRAP, MORI. WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MEEEEEEEEEEE?



^^ triple points for this gif being from the show Free! which is a swimming anime (WHICH YOU HAVE TO SEE BY THE WAY BECAUSE IF YOU DON'T I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU

I WANT A NEW UPDATE JORDY. MAKE IT HAPPEN. SNAPPY SNAP SNAP.

PLEASE update soon, i absolutely adore this story!!!

hi! i'm sorry i took awhile to reach your story! i'm still doing a bit of studying!

anyway, i really loved this!!! when i saw that it's a chaptered story, i was actually gonna read the first chapter only (so i can check out the other recs too) but i got caught up until the third chapter! tbh i don't really know any of these characters in real life, like, at all, but from your story i can tell how close Mori and Honey are! and also how protective Mori is over him. he is so nice and caring, and when i reached the part where he got a bit jealous, i find it to be v v cute.

... Mori isn't Honey's literal dad, right? or is he? :/ but any who, Mori and Kiyomi seem to be so sweet together! i'm really enjoying this story even tho i didn't hv any bg infos!

really really nice job girl

Oh, and when he whispered, "Call me Takashi."

MORI BASICALLY DID THIS TO MY OVARIES. THEY'RE GONE. DEAD. FOREVER LOST. MORI JUST WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!?!!!?!



omygod but i found this gif and i cannot unsee morixhoney.

OHMYGERDWHATWASTHAT??!?!!?! SO MUCH YES! SO MUCH LOVE! OH MY GOD MORIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII-SENPAAAAAIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!! MOE! MOE! MOE! THEY'RE SO CUTE! AND JUST FUCK YEAH MORI, FUCKING GO FOR IT! I CAN'T EXPLAIN MY HAPPINESS WITHOUT USING FOUL LANGUAGE! SORRY! JUST FUCKING FUCK YES!!!

THE HITACHIIN TWINS GIVE TWO THUMBS WAY, WAY UP!



But I would love to see Mori ask her out on a date!! LIKE MY FEELS WOULD EXPLODE. It'd be cute seeing him struggle, like I could see him wanting to ask her and then something always happens to get in the way like he'll be called away or Shiori could steal Kiyomi away and then he'll just be like, "Fuck it" and then Honey has to swoop in and save the day!

You had officially just killed me with feels right now.

Ah!!! They should be official like right now!!!! NOW!!!

@ kim wonshik.
I have to go back on comment on this because holy cow your comment is precious!!!

I love how aloof Mori-senpai is. Like... he's so awkward but it's so cute, you know. And Kiyomi is bringing out the best of him. Ah!

HOLY CRAP! GO, KIYOMI-CHAN, GO! KISS HIM! KISS HIM! YEAAAAAAAAAH! *waves flag with Kiyomi and Mori on it*

me throughout the chapter...



MORI NEEDS TO LEARN HOW TO REACT. LIKE OMFG. AND I WANT HIM TO CHASE AFTER HER AND KISS HER BACK OR DO SOMETHING!

KYAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! SO CUTE! OH MY GOD MORI-SENPAI!!! (I don't know why I call him senpai. Whenever I talk about this show with my friends, I even call Tamaki as Tamaki-senpai. I guess I embrace Haruhi's character a little too much. ) Anywayssssssssssssss....... URGHHH!!!! KIYOMI KISSED YOU, MORI-SENPAI!! She kissed you! ARGHH!!!

Chapter 8:

ERMAHGERD I'M SO PISSED. (NOT AT THE STORY LOL) MY CHROME WINDOW CLOSED DOWN WHEN I WAS ALMOST DONE WRITING THIS COMMENT AND NOW I HAVE TO DO IT ALL OVER AGAIN.

I'M SO CONFUZZLED. WHY DID HARUHI TELL THEM HE WAS A GIRL. IS THIS STORY SET AFTER THE ANIME SERIES? BUT THAT'S SO HARUHI. I CAN TOTALLY HEAR HIM SHOOTING DOWN SHIORI'S AND KIYOMI'S FUN BY SAYING, "Haruhi's just fine." What a fun sucker!



Oh, Mori! How foolish you are to believe that Honey could never get candy and sweets by you even if you check his belongings! Honey will always find a way!



MORI BLUSHED WHEN KIYOMI LOOKED AT HIM. OMFG. THAT'S SO CUTE. THAT'S TOO CUTE. TOO CUTE. TOO CUTE. TOO CUTE. TOO WAY FUCKING CUTE!



BUT STUPID MORI, WHY YOU GO AND IGNORE POOR KIYOMI. BE A MAN AND EMBRACE YOUR FEELINGS FOR HER. GAAAAAAAAAH!

He better beg and plead for forgiveness.

Chapter 7:

I CANNOT PUT INTO WORDS HOW MUCH I SQUEED THROUGHOUT THIS CHAPTER!! I WONDER WHAT SHIORI LOOKS LIKE! AND WHY IS SHE BEST FRIENDS WITH KYOYA?! IS THIS KYOYA BEING KYOYA BY USING HER FRIENDSHIP AS A MEANS TO BETTER HIS FAMILY'S WORK?! SO MANY QUESTIONS! AND WHEN KIYOMI SAID SHE'D THINK ABOUT IT...



TOO CUTE. AND MORI CONTINUES TO FALL HARDER AND HARDER FOR HER! MUAHAHAHAHAAHHA! AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!

( ^^ That looks like such a cute anime btw, I need to find out where it's from so I can check it out)

MORIIIIIIIIII! He's doing weird stuff to my heart and it's making me so flipping fluttery and fluffy-like and oh my god, that was adorable! Haha, it's nice that Honey wasn't the one who caused for them to meet up and now it's like fate pulling the strings! I WANT TO SEE MORI IN A SCARF. HOT DAMN THAT SOUNDS SEXY.

WHEN HE PUT THAT THING AROUND HER I MELTED AND GOT A NOSEBLEED.



AND I MADE THIS REALLY CREEPY FACE WHEN HE TOLD HER TO KEEP IT. I WAS LIKE, "JUST TAKE HER RIGHT THERE MORI, YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO OMFG." FUNNY STORY IS THAT WHEN I WOKE UP I GOT ON MY IPOD AND READ THE CHAPTER THEN SO THIS UPDATE WAS THE FIRST THING I READ (GREAT WAY TO START MY DAY, THANK YOU) AND WHEN I GOT TO THE BOTTOM OF THE SCREEN, I KEPT TRYING TO SCROLL FURTHER BECAUSE I WANTED TO READ MORE AND I WAS LIKE "NOOOO" CURLED UP IN MY BED WITH THE IPOD SCREEN A FEW INCHES AWAY FROM MY FACE.

Ohhhh....!!! Love the update, deary.

Mori is just soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.................................... urgh!! He's so endearing, you know. Like... like... like... on the outside, he acts all cool and aloof and quiet but you can see right there. RIGHT THERE!! He's so sweet and caring and just... urgh!!

YOU MAKE ME LOVE YOU SO MUCH. LIKE HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE??? AND YOU MENTIONED USA-CHAN! OH MY GOD, USA'S ADORABLE! BAHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE THE FACT MORI KEEPS AN EYE ON HONEY WHILE HE'S AROUND DELICATE OBJECTS. IT SOUNDS TOTALLY PLAUSIBLE THAT HONEY WOULD BE SO CAUGHT UP IN EVERYTHING THAT HE'D ACCIDENTALLY BREAK SOMETHING. Though even if he did, I'm sure Kiyomi wouldn't mind. She'd probably be like, "Oh, Honey, it's alright, really." And then he'd cry in her arms and be like, "KIYOMI-CHAN!"



HONEY, IS MY HERO FOR BEING SO DARN SNEAKY. HE IS SUCH A MASTERMIND... A MASTERMIND OF LOVE! HE'S SO SMOOTH AND HE MADE MORI BLUSH, OH MY GOD THAT GOT ME RIGHT IN MY HEART. I THINK I LIKE PASSED OUT FOR A SECOND AND WAS LIKE, MORI BLUSHING. IMAGINING IT. OMFG. *NOSEBLEED* I HOPE YOU KNOW YOU'RE PAYING FOR ANY MEDICAL EXPENSES THAT COME UP BECAUSE OF THIS. HAHAHAHAHAA I CAN'T GET OVER HOW MORI REACTED. IT'S TOO CUTE! AND I SWOONED WHEN I THOUGHT OF TALL MORI HANDING FRAGILE KIYOMI HIS NOTES. LIKE THAT'S ADORABLE. I JUST CAN'T. YOU KNOW?

CONTINUE WITH THIS AWESOME UPDATING. I DEMAND IT.

AND YOU MAKE ME SOUND LIKE SOME KIND OF DICTATOR BY SAYING THAT I DEMANDED THE NEW CHAPTER BE PUT OUT!

OOOOOOOHHHHHHHH YOU INCLUDED A CHAPTER WHERE THEY'RE IN THE HOST CLUB!!!!! I WAS WAITING FOR THAT! I wonder if Kiyomi's a usual visitor of the club because (even though I know not to underestimate Kyoya's web of information) I wonder why he felt obligated to tell Tamaki that. OH WELL. BUT I WONDER WHAT'S WRONG WITH HER?

I'M IMAGINING THAT SHE'S GOING TO BE SICK AND THAT MORI'S GOING TO BE BY HER SIDE AND IT'S GOING TO BE HEARTBREAKING (ARE YOU SERIOUSLY PLANNING ON BREAKING MY HEART?!??!?!?) AND IT'S GOING TO MAKE ME DIE. LIKE IT BETTER NOT BE ANYTHING SERIOUS. I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HER HOME LIFE. I WONDER WHAT HER FAMILY DOES. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT SHE'S GOING TO SAY TO MORI AND HONEY, OH EM GEE GIRL GET THIS NEXT UPDATE OUT PRONTO. NOW. NOW. NOW. NOW. NOW.

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...a slight change in the wind might be enough to lift her off her feet and sweep her away.

I totes imagined Kiyomi being carried away by the wind. OH CRAP THAT WAS FUNNY.

Why haven't I read, recced and subscribed to this story????!!! I thought I already did!

Ah... it's cute how Mori thought that Kiyomi and Honey-senpai are a couple.

Awww... Honey is sooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!

I really can't wait to read more.!!

I WANT TO PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE BECAUSE THIS WAS SO CUTE HURT YOU. You know what I mean, right? It's like when you slap someone really hard when you're happy... except this is much more violent because you give me so many feels with your writing.

MORI IS MAKING MY HEART FLUTTER OVER HERE, MAN. LIKE YOU ALMOST KILLED ME WHEN HE COVERED HIS FACE IN EMBARRASSMENT AND WHEN YOU HAD KIYOMI CALL HIM "MORI-KUN." ONIGIRI. <3 My onigiri always come out like smushed rice clumps. I can already feel Mori being taken in by Kiyomi-chan's charms and it's now like.... now we play the waiting game. why... WHY IS SHE SO DAMN SHY AND ADORABLE?!? AHAHAHAHA it's like Honey's the guardian watching out for them and being all like, "don't eat too much or else there won't be anymore left hohohohohoh"

OH EM EFFF GEEE MORI TO THE RESCUE OVER HERE!

For reals, can I just show you through gifs how I was the entire time? Thanks.



Oh but yes, please continue with your amazing updating! IGNORE THE "SIR"



I'M SORRY THIS COMMENT WAS TOTALLY EVERYWHERE BUT I HAVEN'T SLEPT AND COULDN'T WAIT TO COMMENT SO YEAH. MMKAY I'M GOING TO BED SINCE IT'S 6:30 IN THE MORNING.