Whisper - Comments

I was seriously going to recommend this again, but I saw I already had.

OH MY GOD I JUST WANT TO GIVE MORI A REALLY BIG HUG BECAUSE HE THINKS THAT KIYOMI'S GOING TO REPLACE HIM AND IT'S SAD SEEING HIM SO SAD. And I totes laughed out loud when he just nodded after asking that question. It's so Mori! Ugh, and Kiyomi's just so damn cute when she blushes when he looks at her. I'm hardcore shipping them right now.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN! Sorry, don't mean to be greedy! ...Or do I?

Found this from your comment swap blog.
ERMAHGERD, THAT MORI PICTURE! I LOVE THIS ALREADY.

I feel bad for Mori! He seems so down about Honey acting strangely - it's adorable! I'm mad at Honey for leading him on, but I'm also so very happy and excited! Kiyomi seems like an angel from the way you described her, and when Mori thought Honey had found a girlfriend, I just about died. I don't know what would happen to Mori if Honey had someone else! And Honey is such a little genius! Haha, "I have to go use the restroom!" Oldest trick in the book.

Love this so far and am totally rec'ing and subscribing! Can't wait to read more! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Gotta say, I like the colors in the banner and the layout seems to work nicely, as all of yours seem to. The colors blend well and the rainbow effect is definitely eye-catching. I also have to approve of the title choice and the summary; Evanescence is a fantastic artist, but more than that, I think the selection is attention-grabbing and certainly thought-provoking.

This is interesting; I'd definitely be curious to know what would happen next. It's interesting knowing Mori's worries as he watches Honey, and I think that it's something that a lot of people could relate to. Because I'm not a part of the fandom myself, I couldn't tell you if I thought you were portraying the characters perfectly or what I thought of the pairing you seem to be creating, but I can tell you that even from an outsider's point of view, this seems cool. It's not anything groundbreaking or super suspenseful, but it's... real. I don't know, I just like that it's so easily relatable, and I think it definitely has potential.

Also, gotta love the use of the word 'jiffy'! xD

Hehehe. I'm looking forward to reading this! Mori is so tall, dark, and mysterious. :3 I'm going to badger you if you don't update every week. Muehehe.

Hehe, Honey is such a sly little guy. I have to be real honest here. I love Mori. I love the fact he's so stoic and so tall and I am elated that you have a story about him. I can't wait for your updates. This was very well done, I felt really bad for Mori when he thought that Honey found someone else. ;-; But I think sometimes we forget how cunning he can be.

this is great sozz but i'm subscribing and you're stuck with me sozz again

Love it so far. Update soon please.