I'm glad that she gave Nathan somewhat of an explanation - hopefully that'll keep him at bay for a while. I spotted a small mistake, which was that this sentence doesn't make sense: ...as if he didn’t had no idea. The meeting between Alec and Brin was nice, just in the sense that they accepted each other and didn't really care that they weren't perfect. It should be fun to watch their relationship grow. Great chapter, update soon!
I can sense the chemistry between Alec and Brinley. I have no problem with Nathan, he sounds nice from the way you described him. But he's too perfect, the kind of perfect you suddenly get tired of. Even though I wasn't Brinley, I was touched when he said that it was fine for them to wait.
I don't feel like you're moving too fast or introducing too much terminology - I'm following the story well so far Brinley has such an interesting relationship with Nathan, and I can't wait to see how that all pans out. And I bet she'll see Alec again, so that should be interesting too Only spotted a tiny error - “It’s a patrolman, Come on!” - the 'c' doesn't need to be capitalised. Other than that, you're awesome at making no mistakes while writing in the middle of the night Looking forward to more!