Genevieve - Comments

This is good. Like really good. I haven't read something this good in a long time. I'm subscribing and recommending this story. :)

(p.s. I'm not sure if you made a mistake or if that is how the chapter is supposed to begin but you put Holden in the beginning of Chapter 3. ignore me if i'm wrong, but he just kinda came out of no where and I wasn't sure if you meant to put Christof instead. Anyway great story.)

Perfection.

This is absolutely incredible. So vividly written and with amazing characters. I think its wonderful and can't wait for an update!

B x

Okay. I am obsessed with this story. It is giving me life. Your writing style is intoxicating and I love it.

Omg is this love? I think so!
That cliffhanger at the end wow..
And Christof's 'flirting' my god, its perfection!
Update soon!

This is absolutely amazing!
The storyline is fantastic, and not really one that I have seen in here done well. And your writing is perfect, l feel like I'm reading a published book.
This is incredible, cannot wait for more! :)

Her long, blonde hair hangs heavy around her face, and when she resurfaces, her nostrils are frosted with white and her eyes are impossibly wide, like she’s seen God.

That was the line that reeled me in, hook, line and sinker. And the ending of that second chapter, shit! I haven't been this excited for a story in a long time. I also haven't seen many mob/drug trade stories on here so I'm reeeaaally looking forward to this.

So glad I found this as a recommendation! I've been trying to find a good original fiction around here but haven't found much luck until now. Very interesting first two chapters. I'm excited to see what happens next!

When I read the last chapter, I immediately clicked the subscribe button. I can't wait to see where you'll take this story -especially with the romance between Genevieve and Christoff.

Wow, this is amazing! I'm in love! I hope you continue I'm subscribed and you've been recommended.

I'm very excited to keep reading this. :)

Oh snap! I really like this, your writing is really enjoyable to read and I am loving the characters so far. And the end to that last chapter = win. Can't wait to keep reading!

Wow, action so soon! The character dynamics are really interesting. I'm in love with this.

Ooh! Great ending to that chapter! Can't say I saw it coming! Update soon!

sort of obsessed with this.

Not a story I would usually read but so beautifully written I want to stick around (:

I'm really excited to see where you take this story!