Secret Smiles in the Snow - Comments

You definitely weren't lying about the drama. I am so, so happy with the ending though. I adore realism, even when it hurts (because fictional characters suffering is the only acceptable hurt ever), and you were totally right. It had all the right impact. I'm actually just so freaking happy you brought Benjen back. He was one of my favourite characters and such a good role model for Jon, even though Jon didn't necessarily take it on board.

Jon's sacrifice really does reflect his position and change of personality since coming to the wall in general, and the sort of uncertain ending proves how much Jon isn't ready for that and the task he has ahead of him with the white walkers.

Loved it Nicole!!!

....what...
That's the end? ;;_;; Oh my gosh

You are totally right though, that was a perfect, believable ending. Woo, I'm tearing up right now, how dare you? Haha. Goddamn it.

You did so well with this story, I can't tell you enough how well you wrote!
All the character's are 100% believable and you didn't just go for the happy ending, which would have been majorly tempting. It take's a lot to just leave them hanging like that, in a total emotional limbo (even though they aren't real, but it still hurts inside).

I wonder though, will Sina get a one-shot in the future about her journey's after leaving the wall? Or possibly a whole story of her own? I really liked her character, I'm sad to see her leaving with a broken heart and no where to go, with a future uncertain :( I worry for her.

Oh my god Benjen's back!

But now I'm kinda mad at him, I mean, I know it's the right thing but Jon loves her :(

I don't think Jon was expecting that reaction out of Benjen, it seems like he was blown away by it a little, and Jon know's he's right. I think a big chat with Sam is coming up, after all, Sam can put anything into perspective!

That being said, I have a feeling Jon's about to do something very silly...possibly breaking his vows and running away with her, although he could send her away, and then feel bad and chase after her.

There is so many variables omg.

Please update soon, I need to know what happens ;;_;;

Sad Jon couldn't really enjoy the reunion. Hearing that you have to let the person you love go is painful and depressing. Wonder what Jon will tell Sina. Will he tell her the truth or lie? Will he let her go or find a way for her to stay? Excited for the next chapter already.

This is so cute! I really like how much this story appeals to Jon's softer side and really opens him up. He becomes so closed-up in the series/books and his relationship with Ygritte was so different - being that Ygritte didn't have to rely on Jon for protection or anything and she challenged him. At the end of the day, Jon's never had that softer womanly love - Catelyn being so cold to him and all. That's what I love so much about his dynamic with Si. It doesn't seemed forced either. It could happen in the show really and wouldn't be out of character.

I really like how Sam and Ghost are so involved too. Sam's one of my favourite characters in GoT and you've got him down perfect - except for when he said fuck. Sam's a bit more eloquent, haha.

I was so scared that Si was going to be raped again, but having Ghost burst in made me heave a sigh of relief. Again, I suppose it really shows that connection between Jon and Sina.

I'm really curious to see where you take this - surely it's going to become public knowledge that she's female. So I really can't wait!

(Of course they had sex and got an STI JON SNOW KNOWS NOTHING ABOUT CONDOMS)

Ahahaha, I laughed so hard. "The Itch". DUNDUNDUN.

I know I'm so terrible, but that was too excellent. So realistic too, I always thought it was weird how no one tackled any of the STI's in other fan fictions, so this is like, pure gold to me, haha.

Sam is so sweet, making pad like things for Sina. I want to hug him, ugh.

Poor Jon and Sina though, rough break :(
Breaking vows always comes at a cost.

I love how you have done this chapter, & I'm sorry for no commenting sooner. I shall flog myself. xo

hahaha i should feel bad for them but i laughed so hard when jon started talking about his "itchy area" xd

Oh oh. The itch is mean, red, and attacking the love birds. Poor Sam has to scold Jon. Luckily Si went in first and got it over with. The heart wants what the heart wants. Wonder how things will progress between Jon and Si ?

That last line was pure gold. Ghost approved of Sina from the beginning so that must have given Jon some comfort. Like how they interact with each other. It's so sweet. The little smiles and blushes are great. Also a fan of Sam. He is a true best friend. Liking this story a lot.

Oh god, wauw THE LAST LINE WAS PERFECT!!
I loved this chapter <3

Haha! That last line was excellent! xD Pure Jon!

Oh Ghost, Always trying to ruin moments, he's like a cute third wheel

You def gave this justice, well executed and written. It didn't feel forced or anything! I absolutely love their relationship, and Sina's encouragement for Jon about doing it was believable. It took ages for Ygritte to get him into the sack, and you've translated that well to this situation.

Flawless. :D I can't wait for more!

Love the update! Jon and Sina are so cute!

Love the update! Jon and Sina are so cute!

Love the update! Jon and Sina are so cute!

Thank you for allowing something so beautifully written enter my life!

OH MY GODS!!!! I love this story! It's so cute and adorable and freaking....ARGH! Showers of rainbows and kittens!

OH MY GODS!!!! I love this story! It's so cute and adorable and freaking....ARGH! Showers of rainbows and kittens!

OH MY GODS!!!! I love this story! It's so cute and adorable and freaking....ARGH! Showers of rainbows and kittens!

aaaahw jon is cute ^^
i think it's a shame you killed rolar, could've been interesting with him haning around ^^ anyway, looking forward to the next chapter <3

Love love love this! :)