Secret Smiles in the Snow - Comments

  • Good Ol Sam, remembering to burn the body.

    I loved that you made Jon say something before beheading him, it was excellent, nice to see a touch of Ned rub off on him. :D

    :( I want to hug Sina really bad. WHY DID YOU PUT HER ALL THE WAY AT THE WALL WHERE I CAN'T HUG HER!?!?! tehe

    I love that dialogue between them at the end, he's still hesitant about his feelings, able to show them but not voice them - it's textbook Jon Facepalm Haha.

    Cant wait for the next update ^.^
    I hope no one asks too many questions about the missing "dick", I shall call him a dick. Haha.
    June 1st, 2014 at 08:01pm
  • I really enjoy reading this :)
    June 1st, 2014 at 06:03am
  • This is so adorable, I can't contain my excitement!
    One week? That is far too long!
    Keep up the good job, dearie (:
    June 1st, 2014 at 03:29am
  • Oh a kiss :O
    & OMG I KNEW IT! I KNEW SOMEONE WOULD TRY THAT SHIT! Thank fuck for Ghost and his excellent hearing, I swear to god I would have flown down and punched you, haha, jk.

    I love how Jon's completely gotten protective over her.I'm being legit, I can hear him saying that last line in this chapter and it gives me shivers honestly.

    CHOP OFF HIS HEAD JON! :P

    More please, <3
    May 29th, 2014 at 03:21pm
  • I need more of this in my life!
    May 21st, 2014 at 01:42am
  • I love the way you ended this chapter, very witty ^^ (if that's how you say it... still working on my English). Anyway, please update soon!
    May 20th, 2014 at 05:36pm
  • Naughty Sam...Advocating whores -.- Haha

    I really like the title of this chapter, and how you focus on the oath in this one, but also Jon's conflicting feelings starting up. It's nice to see him warm up :D He's such a snowman
    April 12th, 2014 at 12:48pm
  • ^.^ Update!
    I'm sorry it took me so long to read this one, I kept meaning to but then i'd get distracted. tehe

    I hope Sam isn't too sick, :/
    I really do appreciate the sentiment in this chapter, smiling about the little things, it is so true, and Jon does need to smile more. He seems very reserved in this, I hope she brings him out of his shell a little as the chapters go on :D
    April 7th, 2014 at 04:46am
  • I'm nervous that one of the black brothers will figure out her secret and try something :O

    I want to slap Jon right now, he's being a little bit of a prat imo xD :P You're making this so believable that im actually getting mad at him, ahahaha
    March 28th, 2014 at 04:32am
  • Can't wait to see where this goes! :]
    March 23rd, 2014 at 10:00pm
  • Okay,Okay. WHERE DID YOU FIND THAT JON SNOW PICTURE :O ~fuming with jealously~

    Alrighty: I am really excited to see where this goes. I don't think anybody done this before. It's refreshing to see a story where a girl goes to the wall for Benjen, and not Jon at the start - it's an excellent idea, and I'm glad you've posted this :)

    I also love her description - Is she from the SummerIsles? :D Excellent to see a coloured female in a fan fiction based in the north, I never would have thought of it myself tbh O_O

    Oh, and that name is awesome. I just said it outloud like ten times, and it does sound awesome :D

    I really hope you continue this, I am so into it. :D
    March 23rd, 2014 at 10:56am