Where Is She? - Comments

@ KingSquishy
thanks:) i will like i wrote the 1st page and then i wrote the 2ed one 2 days ago

Add more. Work the story up a bit. Take it wherever you feel in spired, then ask for idea.

@ KingSquishy
so what do supose i do??

It's really hard to fixate on what you want. To know or have any idea where you are wanting to take this. I mean, 100 words is probably not the biggest amount so that's one of the reasons. You need to develop the storyline and then ask for direction. Can't promise you'll get any, but see it like a trade deal. People don't want to invest ideas which are not going to be beneficial or to someone who is unlikely to expand their work. That's my view anyway. I won't invest my ideas unless I know they will be used. Or atleast certain they work