Uh-oh... Trouble in paradise. At least she talked about what was bothering her. Hopefully that will make Zacky change a little. They both need to make an effort. I'm really looking forward to seeing how their relationship will progress with all this drama! Great update :D
Tisk, tisk. Well it seems that there's trouble in paradise. I'm glad she finally voiced how she was feeling, as tense and awkward as it may have been. He needs to face facts that if this relationship is gonna work, then they both need to make the effort to see each other. The band is important, of course, but of the two of them, he has way more flexibility anc freedom to make the time to visit. I hope he realises that from now on.
I fell so behind on this, but finally had time to catch up! And I looooooooove it!
Oh, the drama! XD I'm so glad that she finally told him how she was feeling though, because it was seriously going to eat her up inside. So now I'm excited for both of them - Zacky with his tour, Quinn with her potential awesome summer job and her father being home - but also weary of how much this is going to keep them apart, and the things that might happen in the meantime.
So, it's taken me a couple days to read your story (or what you have posted so far) and I can honestly say I really enjoyed it
Zacky and Quinn's story has been quite the rollercoaster, but I love that everything hasn't just been easy and smooth sailing. It brings a realistic quality to your story which I really enjoy. I also like that her family are still a big part of the story, since a lot of the time writers tend to leave it out (myself included) but utilising them really gives insight and depth to your main character
Anyways, I'm really enjoying your story and I'm definitely looking forward to the next installment
Damn, I honestly thought Quinn would catch him doing something wrong, for a moment. I was so thankful that didn't happen; and that they could be reunited like that again :) Zacky still needs to pay more attention to her though. He needs to make up for that long time they spent apart, since he never flew to NY to meet her. Great update!!
Aggggggghhhhhh finally lol I'm so glad that they finally got to be together. I seriously thought Zaky was up to no good! Lol I get so excited when I see updates for this story!! Can't wait for the next update!!!
Oh... I spent all this time hoping that there wouldn't be many problems between them with them being so far away from each other.. I guess it was inevitable. I understand Quinn's side, though. It'd be nice if Zacky just surprised her with a sudden visit.
I really want to know how long it'll take him to realize how Quinn is feeling. Please update soon!! :)
Hmm, so she's feeling a little let down. I guess she should just come right out and tell Zacky how she feels. Maybe then he'll man up and actually head on out to see her!
I can't believe I never saw that coming. It was right there, just waiting to be said! Poor Quinn. ='(
Poor Quinn... You could really feel her emotions in this chapter. It's sad that her father is being deployed, but hopefully everything will turn out alright. At least everything seems to be going fine with the guys and the band. Great chapter :)
...it never even occurred to me that you might involve 9/11 in this, but now that you have I'm a little surprised that nobody else ever has! I would have liked to see it dragged out a little more, but even in that short period of time you had me shocked, scared, worried... I really felt their emotions. And that surprises me.
I'm worried about her father now. And I never expected any of this, which makes it even better. This is crazy.
Adorable chapter, as always :3 It's sad that they have to be apart again, but hopefully everything will turn out alright like it did last time. And may I just add that Audrey's part as a bartender was awesome? I loved it. Can't wait for the next update!! :D
@ mrsmshadz Oh man, you're right. As an avid baseball fan I feel very ashamed (in my defense I didn't proof read this chapter as well as I normally do haha). Thanks