Paris Redux - Comments

@ Lynda414
Ha! I'm not so surprised that you threw that in there, I'd probably do something simular just because it would be so much fun writing it... although I do hope he gets back at Nora next time she needs a favor. hehe

I'm sure Angie will find out about Gabriel doing that for her, later on. However, knowing how proud he is, I really doubt that Angie will find out from him... at least not directly.

@ Squirky
He he, you know I only asked cause I was nervous of such a... Controversial turn of events...

I'm wondering if Angie is going to find out that he wore that outfit because he wanted to protect her...

@ Lynda414
I know! I know! My attention to detail is not lacking quite that much. However, I wasn't very sure just how much of a role Desyre would have.

Anyhow, sorry, I forgot about to mention about Gabriel’s unforgettable (yeah, I know... contradictive wording, on my part,) part in the play. You just had to go putting a ‘handsome’ man in a maid’s uniform, didn’t you? Do you know how excruciatingly hard it is to take a handsome man seriously, when he’s dressed in a maid’s uniform, complete with a wig and makeup?…surprisingly enough, not that hard… in fact, its pretty amusing to be honest.

Kieran’s comment gave Angie some real good blackmail material for the future...and, oh, the things Callie would do if she had been there in person to see that… but then again, given her talent, maybe she did, and she and Angie , both, won’t let Gabriel live that down. Although, he is to be credited for going through the humiliation, for Angie; it was both very ballsy and sweet of him to do so.

@ EdgeOfTheSea
Yeah, it really is. Like he's suffering from some terrible illness...

So Angie to say, "How long have you been like this?" instead of something like, "How long have you felt this way?" haha

@ EdgeOfTheSea
I noticed that you've had double posts in the past as well.

And I'm glad I have you wondering. ^_^

I love stretching the tension between them. I'm not sure if it's because I love torturing Gabriel, or if I just wanna savor every second. Maybe both?

Sorry for the multiple post. Unsure what's up with my computer.

I have been wondering about Dmitri and if he could still penetrate her mind... and those around her.

Sorry for the multiple post. Unsure what's up with my computer.

Sorry for the multiple post. Unsure what's up with my computer.

I feel as though this an obvious thing that I've considered and I'm just not mentioning it... *re-reads*

The sexual tension ~ gah!!! <3

@ EdgeOfTheSea
I'M REALLY GLAD YOU PICKED UP ON THAT, I REALLY AM, BUT THAT'S THE ONLY THING YOU TOOK AWAY FROM THAT CHAPTER???

I'M SO GLAD YOU MENTIONED STERNBERG. I LOVE HIS TRIANGULAR THEORY. NERDGASM.<3

@ Squirky
Gabriel might be showing his softer side, but the douchey side is not gone! I call it his snarky side myself and that is very much present, even with Angie. I like how even though they're becoming closer, they still snark at each other.

You already know that Desyre is gonna show up and throw a wrench in the works. I mentioned her right in the beginning, so you should KNOW. Still, it's only their first day in Paris, maybe they'll have a little more time till she catches Gabriel's scent. Maybe. >_>

Still, Desyre might try to stir things up, but the real issues that Gabriel and Angie are facing don't stem from her. We'll find out more about them next chapter as Angie digests recent events.

So... no comment about Gabriel's role in the play?

Man! The sexual tension between those two just keeps on building and building, doesn't it? Whew! If they don't start humpin' like bunnies, pretty soon, I'll be missing the douchey Gaberiel... he's been pretty soft, as of late. *wiggles eyebrows* Just playin'...or am I...? *maniacal laugh* hehe

Anyway, I'm just hoping that Desyre doesn't show up and try to ruin their progress... although it very well could lead up to some good drama...so torn! ...but that's a good thing. Keep up the great work!

@ EdgeOfTheSea
No, I wasn't talking about Gabriel's past... Though that is something I'm going to get around to.
>_>
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Lemme post the next chapter, then you might pick up on it...

I mean, I of course wanna know about Gabriel's repressed memories, especially Lilith. Since she was known as the first wife to Adam and was seen as a child-stealing demon in mythology. Via True Blood, she was the first vampire.

@ EdgeOfTheSea
Always. I always have more up my sleeve. >_>

Still waiting for someone to ask me a question that seemed really obvious to me that people would ask as soon as I started this book...

Oh well, more surprises. *steeples fingers*

Gah, the suspense! I mean, I understand the mind after trauma, but it sounds like you have more planned to throw into the mix. ;P