Paris Redux - Comments

@ EdgeOfTheSea
He he, I think a Gabriel dream might be arranged later, or at least a daydream... And yes Angie likes Kieran, but there is another reason she doesn't put herself in those dreams. It's subconscious and stems from her own issues.

Fun fact: that phrase is complete plagiarism. I'll prolly change it when I publish, but its from a song. YouTube Meatloaf's - You Took The Words Right Outta My Mouth. Play the 5:06 one. I've had that song in my writing playlist since book three precisely because of the opening.

Another fun fact: The car dream was not caused by influence. Angie has a lot of stuff to work through. I kinda feel bad for her...

@ Lynda414
I think it is fitting for Angie to have a dream about Gabriel and Kieran. She does find Kieran attractive, just Gabriel is #1.

I love the dream she has in 7 though, the phrase Gabriel repeats is really cool. Like a child's nursery rhyme but... sensual.

@ Lynda414
Gabriel's dream? Please do. *_*

@ EdgeOfTheSea
Noooo, it's too soon! I must tease you all some more! uh, I mean, I'm building up to it! Yeah... >_>

I'm hoping none of this sexyness is seeming overly gratuitous. Like I'm forcing it in, because that's not how I feel. This is where the story is at, it's taken a sexy turn!

And there's a very good reason Angie doesn't put herself in her dreams with Gabriel. Her doing that would definitely be out of character.

Though I guess I could have written Gabriel's dream... >_>

Aw poop, I was hoping there was going to be Angie/Gabriel sexytime *pout*

@ EdgeOfTheSea
*steeples fingers* A perv you say? I see we are kindred spirits. I'll be honest, I didn't want to stop the scene in chapter 6 where I did...
Oh yeah, what did you think?

@ Lynda414
OhmYGOD I would cry. I would seriously break down into tears of joy.

And yes, make two versions~! I'm a perv, I'll admit it.

@ EdgeOfTheSea
When I publish the first book I should offer signed copies to my best fans. *muses* This gives me an excellent idea... I wonder if it's against Mibba's policy to offer physical goods to my best reviewer...

@ EdgeOfTheSea
Yep, rated R at least. I know I can go to NC17 on here, but FictionPress only goes to 'just before explicit'. I'm considering doing two versions. It depends on where the story goes.

Thank you! I would LOVE more feedback, and I love new readers. But man, book 1... So many mistakes in that one... I'm almost done rewriting it for publication, it's going to be so much better and I added some new stuff!

Also, I sent your story to a friend and she is in the process of reading it. I'm hoping she'll comment eventually.
HURRY UP, MEGHAN. CATCH UP AND TELL LYNDA HOW WONDERFUL SHE IS.

Mature?! Oh boy. I'm waiting in anticipation. :D

@ EdgeOfTheSea
*fingers steepled* Yessss, I have pleased you.
>_> Wait till he gets a hold of 'Second Blood'

His notes were wonderful. I was DYING.

@ EdgeOfTheSea
Hehe, yes. Gotta make sure my readers are paying attention. ^_^
Did you like his little notes???
I really wish mibba let me do text formatting, the fictionpress version if his editing looks so much better...

I completely forgot that she is usually the kissed and never the kisser... until him. So cute :3

@ Squirky
I think of Vivian as this really cool mom who's blunt and practical, but Angie's personality is totally at odds with it so they clash all the time. She's fearless too. Sometimes I think she's what Katrina could have been if she'd settled down and had kids instead of becoming Gabriel's gatekeeper.

The chapter was running long so I'm gonna be adding excerpts of 'First Blood' in the next chapter. I just gotta release my inner terrible-fanfic writer.

I love Vivian, she's truly something else! I, too, wanna know what he wrote, and I'm sure the events to follow will not be a disappointment in the ammusing department. ;)

@ EdgeOfTheSea
I WON'T LEAVE YOU IN SUSPENSE LONG.

I WANNA KNOW WHAT HE WROTE!!! >_<

@ EdgeOfTheSea
*fist pump* oh yeah, I've still got it. ^_^