Paris Redux - Comments

Most people are neutral good, so I'm not shocked to see most of the characters as such haha

@ EdgeOfTheSea
Gabriel: True Neutral
Angie: Lawful Good
Dimitri: Chaotic Evil
Franz: True Neutral
Gregori: Neutral Good
Kieran: Neutral Good
Callie: Chaotic Good
More to come

@ Lynda414
I love the list! Alignments are my favorite - lawful good, chaotic evil, etc.

@ Lynda414
Sweet

@ fallen_angel94
Stick around for the next book and I promise it'll be even more amazing. It's going to be all about Gabriel's past. ^_^

@ Lynda414
The latest one really, they finally told each other they love each other. And I like how the headmaster was going to be a Nina

@ fallen_angel94
Thank you so much! We're coming close to the end. What's your favorite book so far?

I love this series I can't wait for the next chapter of this story!!!!!!!!!

@ Squirky
I'm so glad you're back! I will admit I missed you. ^_^
Good news about the first book. The rewrite is nearly done. I'm working on the last chapter now. The cover art is done as well. I'll update everyone when it's completed, so I can thank everyone who's helped me out. ^_^

Sexy Scene: I'm glad t have met with your approval. *thumbs up* Can I ask what made you blush? You don't have to go into explicit detail here, just wondering where I succeeded. :3

Action scenes: I know the fight scene with Dimitri was pretty intense. I've taken it as a personal writing challenge to ramp things up without going into ridiculous territory.

I like how Manigault hasn't fallen in love with Angie like Dimitri did. He just sees her as 'good stock'. It's kinda how he sees Nora as well.

@ Lynda414
First of all... SORRY! I've been M.I.A. for the last 2 1/2 weeks. Family drama, friend drama, Korean dramas, and NBA Playoffs (my team's got it, this year, I just know it!) Anyway... I'm back! :)

-Ohmygoodness! You so were not wrong! Johnny Cash's cover of Hurt is word-for-word perfect in every way for what that moment in their lives must have been like... I cannot wait to read it!... Seriously, I just might faint from holding my breath for that scene.

The Sexy scene - Bravo! You made me blush a bit, reading that... and I'm not one to blush easily!

Chapters 23-26 - Miss Lynda, you sure know how to make a person sit on the edge of their seat. *tips hat* Your actions scenes are pretty amazing, especially as they become more intense, to say the least.

Yuki has become so devoted to Miss Nora in such a sweet way. I'm torn between him and Dexter, and you suck for that. :p

-“You’re sharp, a good quality for a new papillon. You will give me strong new sons.” He sounded pleased.
She took another step back, crossing her arms in front of her chest. “That is definitely NOT happening. EVER.”-

I'm in love with this little section. I love it when the bad guy is interested in the heroine, even if it's not actually in the typical romantic kind-of way, per se.

I cannot wait to see how you wrap up with these last few chapters!

@ Lynda414
First of all... SORRY! I've been M.I.A. for the last 2 1/2 weeks. Family drama, friend drama, Korean dramas, and NBA Playoffs (my team's got it, this year, I just know it!) Anyway... I'm back! :)

-Ohmygoodness! You so were not wrong! Johnny Cash's cover of Hurt is word-for-word perfect in every way for what that moment in their lives must have been like... I cannot wait to read it!... Seriously, I just might faint from holding my breath for that scene.

The Sexy scene - Bravo! You made me blush a bit, reading that... and I'm not one to blush easily!

Chapters 23-26 - Miss Lynda, you sure know how to make a person sit on the edge of their seat. *tips hat* Your actions scenes are pretty amazing, especially as they become more intense, to say the least.

Yuki has become so devoted to Miss Nora in such a sweet way. I'm torn between him and Dexter, and you suck for that. :p

-“You’re sharp, a good quality for a new papillon. You will give me strong new sons.” He sounded pleased.
She took another step back, crossing her arms in front of her chest. “That is definitely NOT happening. EVER.”-

I'm in love with this little section. I love it when the bad guy is interested in the heroine, even if it's not actually in the typical romantic kind-of way, per se.

I cannot wait to see how you wrap up with these last few chapters!

@ EdgeOfTheSea

I've been compiling profiles of my characters based off of TVTropes, because it's fun. I wish I could link them all.
For Angie I've got (so far):
-Lawful Good
-Heart is an Awesome Power
-Scars Are Forever
-Deadpan Snarker
-Genre Savvy
-Damsel Out Of Distress: Will Not Be A Victim
-Magnetic Heroine
‘Recruitment By Rescue’ (Callie)
‘Tell Them Your Quest’ (
-Good Is Not Dumb
-Beware The Nice Ones
-Incorruptible Pure Pureness

For Gabriel (So far):
-True Neutral
-Sealed Badass in a Can
-Good Thing You Can Heal
-Jade-colored Glasses
-Uh-Oh Eyes:
‘Red Eyes, Take Warning’
‘Eye Colour Change’
-Glamour Failure:
‘Unusual Eyes’
‘Silver Burns’
‘Sunlight Burns’
‘Mildly Pronounced Fangs’
‘Undeathly Pallor’
-Clothing Damage
-Magic Pants
-Black Cloak: Figurative, since it’s made from shadows.
-Dark Is Not Evil

I did catch the latter quip! I smirked at that.

@ EdgeOfTheSea
One of Angie's character tropes is Genre Savvy. Those vampire novels have served her well. :3
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GenreSavvy

Also after Dimitri died and Desyre blew out all the windows did you catch Angie's quip? "Load-bearing Boss?"
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/LoadBearingBoss

"Why am I always getting my character revelations from the bad guys?"

hahahha <3

8tracks.com/lynda414/angie-x-gabriel

If anyone disagrees with any of these songs, then they have to give me an example of a better one.

Edit: 8tracks.com/lynda414/crack-mix
>_>

@ EdgeOfTheSea
I was thinking that I never got into the time when she was the same age as Angie. There are a lot of similarities, actually. It's kinda scary...

I think it would be a great idea to talk more about Katrina! I liked the flashback.

@ SingMeIntoEternity
Not looking for a particular genre, just as long as the song describes Angie or could reasonably be sung by her.

@ Lynda414
Adrenalize - In This Moment
Bad girls - M.I.A

Those two come to mind. Which genre of music are you looking for?