Last Hope - Comments

Just red your story and wow! It's absolutely amazing, I really hope you decide to update again!

omg i love this! just read both stories in one sitting and im obsessed! cannot wait for more!!!

Just read all of this and I'm in love! Can't wait for the next update!

Please update soon!! I love this story so much!

Please update soon!! I love this story so much!

Alllllll the feeeeeelllllssss!!!!

ugh
They do work fuck Pat

Jon needs to stop being cute, and especially with those blueberries, heheh!

Anyways, I'm still stuck over who I want Madison to be with. Jon seems to be winning, but Pat will sooner or later budge in again, and ughhh. I just have no clue!

Great new chapter (as well as for your other stories), and thank you for starting a Beau-fic. I love him so fricken much

Best story by far! Your words are amazing. I'm torn with both pat and jon. I just want to know when Madison is face to face with pat.

Pat just completely disappointed me... and Jon has made me somewhat proud. Things are switching up and my feelings are a mess, hahahah!

Fantastic update, regardless

Aaannnd now Madison and Jon dont need to feel bad when they get back together. God job pat, you gave her an out but you didn't need to make such a dick move

Dude...no need to apologize. We all secretly (or not so secretly) loooove the drama!

wow... they both were grade a assholes

I can see why Patrick would think those things about her. He knows it's still Jon. But fuck! Really Kaner!? Jon's the reason she wants to die, and the reason she can't do it. That's like a weird kinda love, that once it's figured out, can be amazing. Will he stay in NYC with her, or convince her to come back to Chicago with him while he recovers? I'm still mad at Patrick. Not even 24hrs since seeing her and knowing she's really fragile, and he just had to get his dick wet. Relationships with Madison are never casual. She wears her heart on her sleeve. And after all of Pat's grandstanding in Chicago, he should know better than to treat her like that. Jon has every right to be mad at him. Jon knows he screwed up and that she deserves better. He wants her to be happy regardless, and Pat royally fucked up. If he loved her like he says he does, he wouldn't have slept with the first thing with tits and a vagina. Even if they weren't official, it's cheating, because she thought they were more. And cheating is worse than not going to an art show. I know art shows are huge to artists, but I do not take kindly to cheaters.

I don't know of we can blame Pat fully. I'm SO conflicted right now because she's so broken, so hurt and she was seeking comfort. I love the fact that Jon got it all even of she doesn't think that she was listening at that point. I feel everythingggggg right now!
This comment could be so much longer but I just have so many thoughts right now and I need another update.

I'm actually crying. This doesn't happen often.
This was incredibly powerful. I think showing it from Jon's perspective was what made it so potent -- I knew that Madison was messed up, but I never would've guessed that she had attempted suicide again. I have a weird feeling in the pit of my stomach after reading this (in the best possible way). I really look forward to seeing how they try to fix this mess.

Well she certainly knows how to destroy a friendship.
I cant blame Jon, he had her 1st. Pat should have never pursued her knowing that they were still in love with each other. I only feel bad for Jon. He didn't get a chance to right his songs before she was hooking up with his best friend

Both my emotions and brain are on the brink of exploding from this update... Oh my goodness.
Madison and Jon just had to do that to me.

YESSSSSS! Jon saved her life, and now he's gonna save her again!

I love this so much, great job!

I understand that she shuts down when she's around him, I really get that BUT it's not like he's the only one to blame. But he's still trying to do right by her and not hurt her more. And them you have Pat playing the "he's my best friend" card.
Grrr my emotions are all over the place with this lol
Great chapter can't wait for more