Last Hope - Comments

You're back!!!!
I'm so happy :):):):):):):):):):)

This chapter was crazy! Emotions are high and maybe she'll believe Jon one day because he did run for her. I'm still mad at Pat, but that's just me ;)
Can't wait for more!!

I loved this new chapter (as well as the updates for your other stories!)

The emotions are so strong in everything you write, and it really brings me in. It's realistic in the way that all the descriptions affect how I feel in relation to the main characters. It's truly a lovely quality to read!

I'm torn on who I want to see Madison with, though. If I were her, it'd be best to kick me out of the fanfic because there would be no way for me to function properly with choosing either Pat or Jon, hehehe! Obviously Madison has more guts than me

I can't wait to read more of this heartfelt story

Poor jonny

I still want her with Toews no doubt about that

Honestly love this. Still want Madison to get back with jon. Please update more!!!

Still rooting for Jon

Ahhh! Finally! my fave is back. Awesome job! I loved how you conveyed how york she is between the two. But dang Johnny like whyyyy. And Pat is just adorable! Thanks for updating!

Please update, I'm sooo emotionally invested in the story!

Update update update!!! Please?

I love Torn so much but I just read Demons today and now this. So now I'm like sooo emotionally invested in this story. I really hope you update soon.

Hope Jon is okay!!

Ah the 'I hate you, I need you in my life' circle. How it tortures us so.

wowza... Emotion overload

Well of course she still loves him. I'm not sure what she thinks will happen at the hospital. But that's what happens when you're in love, you act crazy

Wow. Can't believe she was that close and Pat of course saves the day. Also her and Jon just seem so spiteful so I can't wait to see what happens at the hospital! Great job as always

i've been neglecting commenting on things but I am so excited for the rest of this sequel!!

Aw man, the roller coaster begins again...

Didn't expect an opener like that, wow. I didn't think she's be with Jon so easily but I never expected her to fall back in to Pat. I guess she's trying to move on idk this is soo cray can't wait for more, love it!!

Also just look at the boys ❤️❤️❤️❤️ Sooooo cute

: )

Your writing is outstanding !