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chapter 4:

"Did you break up because of Eric?" She asked Nick and Eric's mouth fell open as Nick started to laugh. OMG hahaha i laughed, but it's so mean! ARTTM's breakup is something too soon to talk about it (I'm lying, it will never be okay to talk about that without shedding a tear)

My friends say that I'm naive or oblivious because, as Remi, I always think boys are just being nice and try not to think too much about it. Now I see that maybe they are right.

I'm embarrassed for taking so long without commenting, but I was/am super busy, so here are the best moments of chapter 3:

Remi calling The Maine of Backstreet Boys made me LMAO. I love how brutal in a funny way she is.

"Seriously? Him?" "Girls actually like him?" there are moments like when John said he accidentally pooped while brushing his teeth that make me think the same.

I agree with the "He may be right on some level, you know? Maybe you were meant to know us". There are some friends in your life that makes you wonder how you lived before them, because it's like they were designed to be your friends.

John is cracking me up. He's so dang sassy and I love it. It's funny how Halvo seems genuinely hurt that Remi doesn't like him.

Every time I read an interaction between Remi and Garrett, I get a stupid grin on my face haha. I can't help it...they are just so cute!

oh, you just HAD to make them all cute and adorable and giving me unbelievable feels....ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. now i'm all flushed and giggly like a little girl...gah. they're so cute together.

but yes, i still think garrett's hiding something...not sure what...but i feel like there's this other side to him that i don't know about...

@ chelsea13
You think he's hiding something? Mhm. Well, I guess you'll just have to wait and see! :)

@ WhiskeyPrincess118
It's ok, I'm making her hate him in fear of me putting them together....haha

@ lovelyhope
Haha I always feel that way! A random idea will pop into my head and I feel like I have to start another story and I have to tell myself no. Lol

@ WhiskeyPrincess118

WhiskeyPrincess118:

" I would rather be locked in a closet with Pat over him" Perfect portrait for @ chelsea13 there ;)

oh my gosh...you don't even know. I love Pat way too much for my own good.

Ugh, I love this story! This is perfect! I coo every time Garrett is mentioned!

" I would rather be locked in a closet with Pat over him" Perfect portrait for @ chelsea13 there ;)

Ugh, I'm bummed that there was no Halvo action on the car ride, but you made up for that at the venue! It still infuriates me that Remi doesn't like him! He's so cute and lovable and adorkable. UGH. I want to lock him up and keep him all to myself...Sorry, major feels! :$ I sometimes forget that life isn't centered around him! xD

"Did you break up because of Eric?" - oh my god I laughed so hard at that...for real. everyone loves Eric and it's so funny to see Remi absolutely loathe him.

and way to go Garrett!! Way to step up there!! Though due to Nick and Kayla's reaction to Garrett/Remi's interaction, you have me sort of side-eyeing Garrett a bit??? I don't know. I'm loving him right now and his adorable awkwardness around Remi, but I don't know...I feel like there's more to him and that he's hiding something...

anyway, I'm super stoked for this :)

"Did you break up because of Eric?" - oh my god I laughed so hard at that...for real. everyone loves Eric and it's so funny to see Remi absolutely loathe him.

and way to go Garrett!! Way to step up there!! Though due to Nick and Kayla's reaction to Garrett/Remi's interaction, you have me sort of side-eyeing Garrett a bit??? I don't know. I'm loving him right now and his adorable awkwardness around Remi, but I don't know...I feel like there's more to him and that he's hiding something...

anyway, I'm super stoked for this :)

So cute. Garrett is getting bold (at least bold for him haha).

Remi's hate for Halvo is hilarious, but also confusing. How can you not like Halvo?!

Totally understand what you mean about having only one active story. I really want to start another one and I have so many ideas swirling around inside my head, but I'm telling myself I need to focus on the two that I currently have and not add another one to the mix. We'll see how that works out.

Oh John, you're hilarious.

Oh Garrett, how ever-so-slightly awkward and cute you are. I loved how stoked he was when he found out Remi was riding solo and things haha. He's like a puppy.

The sass in this story... gosh, this story. I think I'll love it a lot. The song you picked w/ this story and your writing... I'm bound to :)

John cracks me up.

I still can't get over how precious Garrett is in this...(in my head) he was so bummed at first because he thought Remi came with John or Nick, but then found out she was ridin' solo so he was secretly excited haha.

I HAVE PROOF THAT THEY ARE JUST LIKE THE BACKSTREET BOYS:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LSCC_cVFlPw

USED IT WISELY. Ugh, that's like my favorite video of them, those boys know how to move their hips!

Great chapter! :)

Oh my god, yes! I love this, even though I know this is a Garrett romance, I can't help but want it to swing in johns favor. I love Remi, she's very relatable and very likable. I'm trying to tell myself that this whole Remi and Garrett thing will be magical, but my inner self is screaming for her to be with John. D:

Garrett is slightly awkward, and he has mad case of ADD. I met them all except John more than once. I got to hang with Garrett and Jared after a show once and Garrett kept switching from one topic to another and kept getting distracted. Your portraying him perfectly. <3

So again with the sass...haha. its just so great and you write it so well!!! I apologize because all of my comments are starting to sound like broken records. Haha. So happy she had more Garrett action. Can't wait to read more!! You da bessssst

Sometimes I think to myself why Eric doesn't have a million of babes on his feet, if we think everything about Eric is adorkable because we are fans OR he is kind of annoying in fact. Remi gave me the answer haha

"I, well, I mean, no, I just, I can make you a drink though."
When a boy gets nervous it's the cutest thing <3

"Mhm. Not too bad."
This was an answer to masquerade the real one "wow, freaking awesome". They have such cool last names, I wish mine was that fancy.

I love the little bant between Remi and John, that's how true friendships are build.

Ugh. You just made my night girl. Santino, Halvo AND Garrett all in one?! I fucking love you!

Remi, how dare you be annoyed by my man? Oh well, better that than her liking him right? It's one thing to change the ending, but another to change this into a Halvo story at chapter 2. Hahah! Oh, btw if Eric needs a GF for your fic I could totally volunteer as tribute you know ;) ahaha

I love how awkwardly adorable Garrett got at the sight of Remi though!
PRE-Ci-OUS! Ugh. I love this already! :)

More pleaee!!

truth be told, I GIGGLED, when you wrote she was annoyed with Halvo! haha. Loving this though! And I know I said this before, but dang, I really like the John/Remi dynamic!! haha. SO MUCH SASS. And aww she met Garrett :3 Excited for future updates :)

and to comment on your reply, Halvo is DEFINITELY my favorite sassy band member. Garrett is a close second. haha