You Have My Attention - Comments

Shy, awkward Garrett is my favorite. I like Remi, although she's kind of tough o figure out. She has this pretty tough exterior, but it seems like deep down she's sweet and caring.

@ chelsea13
Ah thank you :)
And yes, sassy band boys are my favorite as well. (Especially Halvo) haha

@ WhiskeyPrincess118
Me too! That's why I decided to write a Garrett one!

@ recycledsweaters
Yes Copeland!!!
And I promise there will be more wit happening. Ha.

@ everdeen
Well thank you for giving it a chance! :)

I'm not very into Garrett's stories because I can't picture him with anyone else besides Falyn, but you and your ridiculous amazing writer skills got me. It was love in the first chapter.

PS: Love how Remi is not taking nobody's shit haha

Copeland! Copeland! Copeland! (I really like Copeland)

But pun intended and everything... you have my attention.

I like the John/Remi dynamic. I cackled at this line, "Oh are you the band bitch?".
You and your wit :) I can't wait to see how this unfolds. Yay for you (and your writing)! Yay for Copeland!

I'm kind of excited for this. I've been having major Garrett feels, amongst my Halvo ones, these days! :P

Also forgot to say that I loved how Remi deemed them the wannabe Fall Out Boy...that wasn't gramatically correct, but you know what i mean...right? Haha. Anyway, yeah, love this. :)

Also loving the John/Remi dynamic you've established here. Love the sassiness. Sassy band guys are my favorite. (sassy like Halvo....haha)

I'm already in love with this and you've only posted the prologue. A testament to your writing. I can't wait for this story to see how it pans out :)