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  • shootbackholywater

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    @ akmo4725
    Oh God, Dom Zacky is just too hot to handle!!

    Maybe they will, maybe they won't, you never know when Jimmy is around haha! Thank you for reading and commenting!
    January 17th, 2015 at 10:59pm
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    @ NikkiFoxy8
    He's hot doing just about anything ;) haha but yes, dominant Zacky is just unffffff

    Thanks for reading, and all your lovely comments! I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!
    January 17th, 2015 at 10:58pm
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    @ robynaicila
    Haha thank you, I aim to please ;)

    I hope you enjoy the future chapters, I'll throw some more sexy time in there just for good measure ;)
    January 17th, 2015 at 10:57pm
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    @ Total Nightmare
    Thank you so much! I'm honestly so flattered :)

    Haha Jimmy always interrupts at the most inconvenient time! He's just a big kid really Very Happy

    Thank you for taking the time to read, and I hope you enjoy the future chapters!!
    January 17th, 2015 at 10:56pm
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    @ vampire_sun
    I literally live for your comments Very Happy

    I have a good three or four chapters already planned out, I had a sudden brain wave yesterday at work and had to type it all into my phone, so I think you'll be pleased with how this story is going to go! At least I hope!

    I love writing Jimmy, obviously I can only wonder if he was any way similar to how im portraying him! He loves his friends and wants them all to be happy, I just think he doesn't quite see the problems that Cassie and Zacky know they will face, he's just dead set on getting them together. I know he will probably flip when he finds out about brandon though, I can only imagine that an angry Jimmy would be a scary Jimmy!

    Hopefully going to get another chapter up tomorrow, but as always thank you for your awesome comments :)
    January 17th, 2015 at 10:54pm
  • vampire_sun

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    Ugh, I hate Brandon, too. I do think Cass should call the police and tell them he's been harassing her, though, just so there is a record of it since I know he isn't going to give up easily. Cassie's probably wishing she and Zack had stayed together now, even though they're both too exhausted to do anything. At least he lives close and she doesn't have to be alone for long.

    I say this almost every chapter, but I love how you're writing Jimmy and his unstoppable push to getting Zack and Casdie together. If only he really knew :) But they're going to have to be more careful now since he's probably going to be watching them like a hawk, trying to catch subtle looks to prove his point.

    Yay for a wedding!
    January 17th, 2015 at 10:19pm
  • vampire_sun

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    I've had this open in a new tab since you posted it, and I finally had a chance to read it this morning.

    Of course Jimmy would be bouncing off the walls at 4 am. Hopefully Zacky & Cassie are able to go back to that conversation, though, because I want to know what he was going to say. Or really, if my assumptions are right. Loving how relaxed they were with each other. Even though they both have feelings for each other, there was always the possibility of one of them going ' oh shit, what'd we do'?

    I'm excited to see how they handle things now that they're home. Obviously it's normal for them to hang out with each other, but I'm curious to see how long it takes someone else to notice, aside from Jimmy since he already sorta thinks he knows something.

    I'm really loving Val in this. It's good for Cass that she has someone she can talk to about things, and I just hope Val doesn't accidentally let something slip in her excitement. You can tell that she, like Jimmy, really just wants her friends to be happy.
    January 15th, 2015 at 04:35pm
  • Total Nightmare

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    I just found this story and I'm already in love with it! I seriously love how you depicted the guys, and the way they mess around with each other is great. I also love love love what's going on with Zacky and Cassie. Damn, they're so good together. It's a shame jimmy had to interrupt them while Zacky was speaking..
    Loved the show, too, and all their teasing. I really can't wait to read more of this! Good job!
    Please update soon!
    January 14th, 2015 at 01:28am
  • robyn.

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    I've just read all the chapters and holy shit I am in love with this story and turned on haha! Man alive, Zacky and Cassie are brilliant together! I seriously can't wait for more Very Happy
    January 14th, 2015 at 01:09am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Awesome chapter! Zacky and Cassie really really need to figure out their relationship and tell each other how they feel! Zacky is so hot telling Cassie she's in trouble! Thank you so much for the new update! Please update soon! Very Happy
    January 13th, 2015 at 05:17pm
  • akmo4725

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    Oh yeah a little domination by mr. Vengeance!!!!! Damn you jimmy!!! He was going to tell her!! I'm hoping they get a chance o finally tell each other they love each other!!' She's in trouble!!
    January 12th, 2015 at 11:39pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Please update again soon! Very Happy
    January 1st, 2015 at 04:10pm
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    awesome story so far!!!
    December 7th, 2014 at 09:02pm
  • vampire_sun

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    This chapter most certainly did not disappoint, m'dear! In fact, the only thing that could have made it disappointing was if someone decided to interrupt them again.

    You have a gift for writing sweet and sexy at the same time, though with these two and all the buildup, I expected nothing less. And, I mean, this wasn't just a random hookup because they were horny for either of them, so the fact that it wasn't just a wham, bam, type situation was nice.

    I think they will continue once they get home. Clearly there are deeper feelings on both sides, but right now they both just want to have a little fun. I can also see Zack getting scared once they're home, and their situation becomes really real to him and it isn't just fun on the road anymore, ya know? That could work in Jimmy's favor, though. Zack and Cass get closer, Zack gets scared and pushes Cass away, Jimmy doesn't know any of this(because I can't see Cass or Zack talking about their feelings much to the others - they both seem too private for that) and sets his plan in action and Zack takes the bait. But there's also the fact that she's going to have to deal with her psycho ex, and I can see Zack being a good stress reliever for her after dealing with his bullshit all day long. It'll definitely be easier for them to be together at home, although they'll have to be careful if the other guys have keys to their homes - never know who'll come barging in at some ungodly hour Wink
    December 1st, 2014 at 02:25am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    They finally had sex! He told Cassie he loves her! I really hope he says it to her when she wakes up and she tells Zacky she loves him! Thank you so much! Please update soon!
    December 1st, 2014 at 01:24am
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    @ shootbackholywater
    I didn't think it would be from first time, but if they kept at it! Down the road cute little harlot babies!! Just wishful thinking!! Zacky better man up and tell her to her face
    December 1st, 2014 at 01:07am
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    I didn't think it would be from first time, but if they kept at it! Down the road cute little harlot babies!! Just wishful thinking!! Zacky better man up and tell her to her face
    December 1st, 2014 at 01:07am
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    @ shootbackholywater
    I didn't think it would be from first time, but if they kept at it! Down the road cute little harlot babies!! Just wishful thinking!! Zacky better man up and tell her to her face
    December 1st, 2014 at 01:07am
  • shootbackholywater

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    @ akmo4725
    Haha thank you!! I'm glad you liked it :) I think we all knew that admission was coming! Now the matter is when will he be ready to admit it to her when she isn't sleeping?!

    I can assure you pregnancy won't fit into this story right now, she won't fall pregnant from their first time, I promise!
    November 30th, 2014 at 07:07pm
  • akmo4725

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    Well that. Was just insanely hot!!! Awww zacky loves her!! Casa does too, I'm just ready for them to admit it to each other and realize what they have is more than a fling!!! Their sex was so hot and sweet at the same time! Could she end up preggo? I mean the pill doesn't always work hahaha
    November 30th, 2014 at 06:42pm